for Left in the middle3/27/2010 c4 Dark Lynnette
That was cute. The pacing of the story is nice. I'm getting a feel for the characters, especially Jon, and you're revealing just enough at the right times to keep me interested. I am oh-so-curious about the history or non-history of Sebastian and Jon. I also wonder what will happen at this strange reunion.
That was cute. The pacing of the story is nice. I'm getting a feel for the characters, especially Jon, and you're revealing just enough at the right times to keep me interested. I am oh-so-curious about the history or non-history of Sebastian and Jon. I also wonder what will happen at this strange reunion.
11/23/2009 c1 Heather
I really liked the story and thought why not more reviews? It's good, wish ya had more stories...like this one
I really liked the story and thought why not more reviews? It's good, wish ya had more stories...like this one
5/6/2008 c1 
15Bluorange
You have a very interesting writing style. It is very descriptive, but it doesn't go on and on and on. Keep up the good work, on to the next chapter!
15BluorangeYou have a very interesting writing style. It is very descriptive, but it doesn't go on and on and on. Keep up the good work, on to the next chapter!
4/29/2008 c4 RaineLuna
Dang, I knew the names sound so commonplace in my country. Do you happen to be Filipino, too? Anyway, interesting local color. Just sayin'. I look forward to reading the rest :D
Dang, I knew the names sound so commonplace in my country. Do you happen to be Filipino, too? Anyway, interesting local color. Just sayin'. I look forward to reading the rest :D
4/25/2008 c1 13Tsumujikaze no Soujutsu
Well, I'll have to say that this is another interesting story from you. btw, is this a prelude to Ever After Are For Kids? I'm thinking about this because you actaully used the same characters from there... erm so yeah, guess that's the case. Anyway, this chapter really did well in introducing the characters although I guess you may want to improve the portrayl of the characters. Anyway, nothing much of a CC to say here except it's a good job done. I think I'll have to go now. I've got something on soon. Going to watch Harold And Kumar Escape From Guantanamo Bay. On a sidenote, I've watched the first movie and I virtually go lmao lol! XD
P.S: Thanks very much for your review on Elven Chronicles. I really hope you can review another of my story Bloodfire soon although it's only one chapter since I'm planning to update this one next. ;)
13Tsumujikaze no SoujutsuWell, I'll have to say that this is another interesting story from you. btw, is this a prelude to Ever After Are For Kids? I'm thinking about this because you actaully used the same characters from there... erm so yeah, guess that's the case. Anyway, this chapter really did well in introducing the characters although I guess you may want to improve the portrayl of the characters. Anyway, nothing much of a CC to say here except it's a good job done. I think I'll have to go now. I've got something on soon. Going to watch Harold And Kumar Escape From Guantanamo Bay. On a sidenote, I've watched the first movie and I virtually go lmao lol! XD
P.S: Thanks very much for your review on Elven Chronicles. I really hope you can review another of my story Bloodfire soon although it's only one chapter since I'm planning to update this one next. ;)
6/28/2007 c19 CheeseyMonkey324
the ending was too funny! i really love jons personality! cant wait to read futher. great job on the story.
the ending was too funny! i really love jons personality! cant wait to read futher. great job on the story.
4/30/2007 c21 9Tempre's Twilight
yay! I liked this story, and I'm happy for the happy ending! Is the next one going to be the drama with Marc and Paolo, or will there be a new beaux for our Marcy boy?
9Tempre's Twilightyay! I liked this story, and I'm happy for the happy ending! Is the next one going to be the drama with Marc and Paolo, or will there be a new beaux for our Marcy boy?
4/29/2007 c21 J.D. California
i have to admit i was EXTRMELY skeptical in reading this story. but i loved it!
gorgeous story!
i have to admit i was EXTRMELY skeptical in reading this story. but i loved it!
gorgeous story!
4/29/2007 c21 2Fork-In-Your-Eye
Its completed! *sniffs* I'm so happy! haha... ^^ I like the ending. Aw... the sweet happy endings. I love sweet happy endings. Sebastian and Jon are finally together. Thanks for the story. You're the best.
2Fork-In-Your-EyeIts completed! *sniffs* I'm so happy! haha... ^^ I like the ending. Aw... the sweet happy endings. I love sweet happy endings. Sebastian and Jon are finally together. Thanks for the story. You're the best.
4/9/2007 c20 7Maris. S
wow... that's all I really have to say is wow. I wasn;t too sure on how much I was going to favour this story, but I favour it a lot~ I can't wait for the next update~
7Maris. Swow... that's all I really have to say is wow. I wasn;t too sure on how much I was going to favour this story, but I favour it a lot~ I can't wait for the next update~
4/8/2007 c20 poomiki
only one more chapter left? No!
This story is too short, and I'm going to miss jon and Sebastian :-)
I really liked the story, it had a bitter sweet kind of feeling... I hope to see more stuff from u in the future, cause I absolutely adore your writing style.
only one more chapter left? No!
This story is too short, and I'm going to miss jon and Sebastian :-)
I really liked the story, it had a bitter sweet kind of feeling... I hope to see more stuff from u in the future, cause I absolutely adore your writing style.
4/6/2007 c20 9Tempre's Twilight
NO! It can't be over! Cause the story is so GOD!
Anywho, that was a great chapter, and have I mentioned lately how much I love this story? If not, I DO!
Sincerely,
Your reader:
~Myssez~
9Tempre's TwilightNO! It can't be over! Cause the story is so GOD!
Anywho, that was a great chapter, and have I mentioned lately how much I love this story? If not, I DO!
Sincerely,
Your reader:
~Myssez~
3/20/2007 c19 Tempre's Twilight
wow. Love the story, and that punch was...wow.
I hope things work out between Sebastion and Jon.
anywho, hope to see more.
~Myssez~
wow. Love the story, and that punch was...wow.
I hope things work out between Sebastion and Jon.
anywho, hope to see more.
~Myssez~