for Getting Malcolm4/17/2022 c1 valpal4630
Pinkmist we miss you. Please come back. I love this story so much and I’m willing to pay for it. Please message me if that’s an option, or if it’s up on Amazon or wherever. There’s so many things that still need to be said and explained. Like are we ever going to get a confession out of Malcolm regarding his feelings? What was that convo about “scoring” with Malcom and Brent? The fact that it’s been years since this story has been published but still incredibly addictive years after is a testament to your writing. I’ve been re-reading a lot of my old favorite fiction press stories that had me wondering why I ever liked them; they feel too cheesy at this day and age but your story never aged like the rest of them.
Please message me if for sell or if you can at least message me snips of what you were planning on doing with the characters just so I can have some closure. Thank you for all your hard work and I hope you’re ok!
Pinkmist we miss you. Please come back. I love this story so much and I’m willing to pay for it. Please message me if that’s an option, or if it’s up on Amazon or wherever. There’s so many things that still need to be said and explained. Like are we ever going to get a confession out of Malcolm regarding his feelings? What was that convo about “scoring” with Malcom and Brent? The fact that it’s been years since this story has been published but still incredibly addictive years after is a testament to your writing. I’ve been re-reading a lot of my old favorite fiction press stories that had me wondering why I ever liked them; they feel too cheesy at this day and age but your story never aged like the rest of them.
Please message me if for sell or if you can at least message me snips of what you were planning on doing with the characters just so I can have some closure. Thank you for all your hard work and I hope you’re ok!
9/9/2021 c1 Help me out
Btw can anyone in the comment section recommend any story similar to this one? And characters that are similar to Brent and Adelle? I'm truly bummed out that the author disappeared and we didn't get to see more of the story. Brent and Adelle are fantastic.
Btw can anyone in the comment section recommend any story similar to this one? And characters that are similar to Brent and Adelle? I'm truly bummed out that the author disappeared and we didn't get to see more of the story. Brent and Adelle are fantastic.
9/9/2021 c1 I need more
I just discovered this story today and now it's one of my favorite stories ever. Yes,I'm officially IN LOVE with Brent. I adore Adelle as 's such a bummer you stopped writing this. I can tell you now i would pay money to get more make a comeback!
I just discovered this story today and now it's one of my favorite stories ever. Yes,I'm officially IN LOVE with Brent. I adore Adelle as 's such a bummer you stopped writing this. I can tell you now i would pay money to get more make a comeback!
9/9/2021 c1 I need more
I just discovered this story today and now it's one of my favorite stories ever. Yes,I'm officially IN LOVE with Brent.I adore Adelle as 's such a bummer you stopped writing this.I can tell you now i would pay money to get more make a comeback!
I just discovered this story today and now it's one of my favorite stories ever. Yes,I'm officially IN LOVE with Brent.I adore Adelle as 's such a bummer you stopped writing this.I can tell you now i would pay money to get more make a comeback!
8/15/2021 c1 My review
You know what I want to see now? Malcolm revealing his true feelings for Adelle. He may love Lori (i still think he's using her )but his jealousy is obvious and I just want to see Adelle's reaction when he finally snaps and reveals it all. I actually think he had some feelings for her way before she started to feel something for just don't know much about Malcolm anyway.I think he's an asshole and while Lori irrritates the hell out of me i don't think she deserves to be cheated ofc I want to see SO MUCH MORE from Brent and Adelle's tension between them in this last chapters was too much and now we need an actual sex scene after all that. They are just so hot together. Also, how about Brent's background? We know so little about his family life. I think reading this story again was a mistake because I'm invested again and I just want to read more and how all characters end.
You know what I want to see now? Malcolm revealing his true feelings for Adelle. He may love Lori (i still think he's using her )but his jealousy is obvious and I just want to see Adelle's reaction when he finally snaps and reveals it all. I actually think he had some feelings for her way before she started to feel something for just don't know much about Malcolm anyway.I think he's an asshole and while Lori irrritates the hell out of me i don't think she deserves to be cheated ofc I want to see SO MUCH MORE from Brent and Adelle's tension between them in this last chapters was too much and now we need an actual sex scene after all that. They are just so hot together. Also, how about Brent's background? We know so little about his family life. I think reading this story again was a mistake because I'm invested again and I just want to read more and how all characters end.
8/15/2021 c1 Are you alive
I read the whole story today again (because it's been years since i've read it for the last time) and I can't believe I'm still so much in love with this story. Brent and Adele are just so good together. Btw, I can't believe you started to write this story in 2006 and you're still not done! That's crazy. This long silence from you is worrying and i hope you're well man..Just remember,you still have faithful readers that check out from time to time if your story was finally updated!
I read the whole story today again (because it's been years since i've read it for the last time) and I can't believe I'm still so much in love with this story. Brent and Adele are just so good together. Btw, I can't believe you started to write this story in 2006 and you're still not done! That's crazy. This long silence from you is worrying and i hope you're well man..Just remember,you still have faithful readers that check out from time to time if your story was finally updated!
7/25/2021 c23 Update
WTF happened to pinkmist? I REALLY don't understand why she didn't update the story for 6 years now! That's insane! There are so many of us who want to see the end and I belive many of us would pay for it. For me the best story on fictionpress. I want to read more about Adelle/Brent!
WTF happened to pinkmist? I REALLY don't understand why she didn't update the story for 6 years now! That's insane! There are so many of us who want to see the end and I belive many of us would pay for it. For me the best story on fictionpress. I want to read more about Adelle/Brent!
4/25/2021 c23 Rererere
Update?! It’s been years!
Update?! It’s been years!
3/25/2021 c23 
7Ayaka Chmiel
Are you alive? Is there more? I mean if it ended here it's be fine but I kinda of want more to see where everything goes and how it ends?
Anyway hope the crazy of 2019/2020 hasn't gotten to you!
7Ayaka ChmielAre you alive? Is there more? I mean if it ended here it's be fine but I kinda of want more to see where everything goes and how it ends?
Anyway hope the crazy of 2019/2020 hasn't gotten to you!
10/23/2020 c23 JB
I just discovered this story a week ago, so I guess I'm also a little late. I don't normally take the time to comment, but this story is so real and well-written I was completely absorbed. It is a beautiful distraction from these crazy corona-times.
I hope you are able to finish it some day.
I just discovered this story a week ago, so I guess I'm also a little late. I don't normally take the time to comment, but this story is so real and well-written I was completely absorbed. It is a beautiful distraction from these crazy corona-times.
I hope you are able to finish it some day.
6/21/2020 c1 6Polished Gem
I don’t know if you will ever finish this with all the years that have gone by. I don’t know if you even read these reviews anymore. The plagiarism sucks, hey? I’ve had my books plagiarized too. If you ever do finish, drop me a line. I would pay for a copy to support if you put an electronic version on amazon.
About getting Malcolm...I love how real, and raw, and messy it is, like real life. Your dialogue is impeccable and realistic. You draw the reader in fully. There were a few typos, but they were barely noticeable because you draw the reader in so fully that it’s hard to notice those details. All in all, good on you, and keep writing!
6Polished GemI don’t know if you will ever finish this with all the years that have gone by. I don’t know if you even read these reviews anymore. The plagiarism sucks, hey? I’ve had my books plagiarized too. If you ever do finish, drop me a line. I would pay for a copy to support if you put an electronic version on amazon.
About getting Malcolm...I love how real, and raw, and messy it is, like real life. Your dialogue is impeccable and realistic. You draw the reader in fully. There were a few typos, but they were barely noticeable because you draw the reader in so fully that it’s hard to notice those details. All in all, good on you, and keep writing!
4/1/2020 c23 j
Hey, so I’m 4 years late but just wanted to tell you this is one amazing story, heck I finished this in 5 hours. I realized it wasn’t complete nearly halfway but I was already in too deep to stop reading. I wish you could finish this someday. Hope you’re still writing!
Hey, so I’m 4 years late but just wanted to tell you this is one amazing story, heck I finished this in 5 hours. I realized it wasn’t complete nearly halfway but I was already in too deep to stop reading. I wish you could finish this someday. Hope you’re still writing!
9/27/2019 c23 Amelie
Please updatee
Please updatee
6/9/2019 c23 Kassie
This was incredible. I need more. Please.
This was incredible. I need more. Please.
11/1/2018 c23 Kirsten Abigail Jamero Galeon
Wow this is litterally one of my favorite originals works of fiction I have ever read and I am very very picky when it comes to original works and I say this is truly amazing.
Wow this is litterally one of my favorite originals works of fiction I have ever read and I am very very picky when it comes to original works and I say this is truly amazing.