for Getting Malcolm7/7/2015 c5 jei
Most people probably loved the sexy times in here but as for me i really loved that sweet moment where brent comforted adelle. It was really nice of him to do that for her.
Most people probably loved the sexy times in here but as for me i really loved that sweet moment where brent comforted adelle. It was really nice of him to do that for her.
7/7/2015 c3 jei
Nvr mind I think brent kissed adelle because he knew that she likes him and this story shouldve been getting lori because it's brent who actually used adelle to get lori and not the other way around... :(
Nvr mind I think brent kissed adelle because he knew that she likes him and this story shouldve been getting lori because it's brent who actually used adelle to get lori and not the other way around... :(
7/7/2015 c1 jei
I've always wanted to know...why did brent kiss adelle in this chapter?
I've always wanted to know...why did brent kiss adelle in this chapter?
7/3/2015 c22 Hisui
It's been a little while since I last re-read this story, and I swear that some (a lot of?) passages have changed. (For example, I distinctly remember that the Toni's old background paragaph ended with "Christ, such power at eight," or something to that effect. I liked the change though-far more realistic.) I think most of the edits were really good, though in some parts, the flow has become more stilted. Or maybe I've just read this fic one too many times, haha.
I still love this couple so much it's ridiculous though. I don't know how long ago these edits were posted, but it gives me hope for you finishing this story in 2015. :)
On a separate, unrelated note, I'm thrilled you love Sara Bareilles. My bad days are punctuated by Sweet As Whole.
It's been a little while since I last re-read this story, and I swear that some (a lot of?) passages have changed. (For example, I distinctly remember that the Toni's old background paragaph ended with "Christ, such power at eight," or something to that effect. I liked the change though-far more realistic.) I think most of the edits were really good, though in some parts, the flow has become more stilted. Or maybe I've just read this fic one too many times, haha.
I still love this couple so much it's ridiculous though. I don't know how long ago these edits were posted, but it gives me hope for you finishing this story in 2015. :)
On a separate, unrelated note, I'm thrilled you love Sara Bareilles. My bad days are punctuated by Sweet As Whole.
6/23/2015 c16 August
Damn, in a few months, 2 to b exact, it'll be a year since I last had feeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeels about these two. How I miss them :'(
Damn, in a few months, 2 to b exact, it'll be a year since I last had feeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeels about these two. How I miss them :'(
6/21/2015 c22 jezzie
I like it! This is a long running story and I can definitely see how your writing style has evolved over more than 8 years. I'm excited to read more, I hope you update soon!
I like it! This is a long running story and I can definitely see how your writing style has evolved over more than 8 years. I'm excited to read more, I hope you update soon!
6/20/2015 c22 Fan 45140306433
RANT TIME
Okay so I found this story the summer before I started college (like 2 years ago) and I fell in love with it. I've read so many mediocre stories on here, but this story was so incredibly written I didn't even care that it was started so long ago.. I've reread it like 100x and every time a new chapter gets posted it makes my entire month. Now, this story was published in like 2006 (I was 11 years old), I really, really hope that I'm not 30 years old by the time it gets finished. Pinkmist, will you please, please at least give us an authors note or something for us to hold onto until the next chapter is posted. Pllllleeeeeaaassse.
RANT TIME
Okay so I found this story the summer before I started college (like 2 years ago) and I fell in love with it. I've read so many mediocre stories on here, but this story was so incredibly written I didn't even care that it was started so long ago.. I've reread it like 100x and every time a new chapter gets posted it makes my entire month. Now, this story was published in like 2006 (I was 11 years old), I really, really hope that I'm not 30 years old by the time it gets finished. Pinkmist, will you please, please at least give us an authors note or something for us to hold onto until the next chapter is posted. Pllllleeeeeaaassse.
6/10/2015 c22 Guest
a friend of mine introduced this to me and i've been hooked ever since... .pls. for the love of efffin *** update the story.. felt like i've been visiting this page for ages looking for an update... will wait another century for one or another lifetime but .pls. update...
a friend of mine introduced this to me and i've been hooked ever since... .pls. for the love of efffin *** update the story.. felt like i've been visiting this page for ages looking for an update... will wait another century for one or another lifetime but .pls. update...
6/10/2015 c22 Guest
a friend of my introduced this to me and i've been hooked ever since.
a friend of my introduced this to me and i've been hooked ever since.
6/10/2015 c22 Bee
Its been almost 5 months since you said you would be "updating this within a month"
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Its been almost 5 months since you said you would be "updating this within a month"
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6/7/2015 c22 elmo
i'm honestly feeling like brent o m g. all this leaving me hanging and the tease gahhh. i can't put this couple behind me. not until they have sex again (lmaooo) and profess their eternal love for each other.
i'm honestly feeling like brent o m g. all this leaving me hanging and the tease gahhh. i can't put this couple behind me. not until they have sex again (lmaooo) and profess their eternal love for each other.
6/3/2015 c1 Belle
How many number of reviews do you need to give us an update? 7 more? 10 more? 22 more?
Will this kind of bribery works because I am seriously considering doing exactly that...errr don't hate me if I read it all in one go without reviewing every single time but hey! That just gives me reason to relieve the experience all over again...and hopefully more?
How many number of reviews do you need to give us an update? 7 more? 10 more? 22 more?
Will this kind of bribery works because I am seriously considering doing exactly that...errr don't hate me if I read it all in one go without reviewing every single time but hey! That just gives me reason to relieve the experience all over again...and hopefully more?
5/31/2015 c1 Guest
lol. Just saw your A/N (which happens to be my birthday!) about updating within the month. I will be continuously waiting for the update! I hope you didn't actually get into an accident...
lol. Just saw your A/N (which happens to be my birthday!) about updating within the month. I will be continuously waiting for the update! I hope you didn't actually get into an accident...
5/31/2015 c10 Hello
Plot twist: Brent and Del end up getting together, FO' REALS.
Plot twist: Brent and Del end up getting together, FO' REALS.