for Getting Malcolm2/22/2016 c23 blixt
I don't want to have to read this story for the 19th time (yup i'vw counted) so please PLEASE update tbh i think i know this story by heart (be proud belongs in the same league as the harry potter books)
anyway... update you must (ehehehh jedi mind tricks) but now im rabling, ANYWAY my point is please,please,please,please,please update
I don't want to have to read this story for the 19th time (yup i'vw counted) so please PLEASE update tbh i think i know this story by heart (be proud belongs in the same league as the harry potter books)
anyway... update you must (ehehehh jedi mind tricks) but now im rabling, ANYWAY my point is please,please,please,please,please update
2/19/2016 c23 Guest
Simple request
Please update because me and thousands of others really want to see Adele and Brent have a happy ever after
Thanks xxx
Simple request
Please update because me and thousands of others really want to see Adele and Brent have a happy ever after
Thanks xxx
2/18/2016 c23 Guest
It's funny, because this isn't even a real review or a critique of chapter 23. It's more like an...encouragement to help us find the next chapter. So here it goes:
Most people don't like procrastinating. Most people don't want to. I want to. Give me a reason to procrastinate. Give me something to procrastinate on, because none of the other stories can help me do it.
It's funny, because this isn't even a real review or a critique of chapter 23. It's more like an...encouragement to help us find the next chapter. So here it goes:
Most people don't like procrastinating. Most people don't want to. I want to. Give me a reason to procrastinate. Give me something to procrastinate on, because none of the other stories can help me do it.
2/17/2016 c23 Guest
Sometimes when I see your updates, I say a quiet, but powerful yes into the silence of my room.
Sometimes when I see your updates, I say a quiet, but powerful yes into the silence of my room.
2/5/2016 c1 Guest
I think I am going to throw a party the day you update
I think I am going to throw a party the day you update
2/4/2016 c23 Guest
# if this isn't love, tell me what it is. Cause I could be dreaming or just plain crazy.. #
I hope I don't die before I finish this story, it would be a shame D
# if this isn't love, tell me what it is. Cause I could be dreaming or just plain crazy.. #
I hope I don't die before I finish this story, it would be a shame D
2/4/2016 c23 
69Shadowswept
I read this straight through and stayed up until two in the morning to finish it. The story hooked me and wouldn't let me go. Unlike most incomplete stories, this one is almost finished. It would be a shame for you to quit when you're so close to the end. Even just one more chapter could wrap it up. I can tell you how to publish it, but first you have to finish the story. With over a hundred thousand words, you definitely have enough for a novel. A lot of books are only 50,000 words. I really like this story. It's love/hate with a twist, and they have great chemistry. Please finish it. You'll have a great sense of accomplishment, many happy readers, and maybe even a successful novel.
69ShadowsweptI read this straight through and stayed up until two in the morning to finish it. The story hooked me and wouldn't let me go. Unlike most incomplete stories, this one is almost finished. It would be a shame for you to quit when you're so close to the end. Even just one more chapter could wrap it up. I can tell you how to publish it, but first you have to finish the story. With over a hundred thousand words, you definitely have enough for a novel. A lot of books are only 50,000 words. I really like this story. It's love/hate with a twist, and they have great chemistry. Please finish it. You'll have a great sense of accomplishment, many happy readers, and maybe even a successful novel.
2/2/2016 c23 Bee
Have you forgotten us? :(
Have you forgotten us? :(
1/29/2016 c1 Guest
10 YEARS... IVE BEEN WAITING FIR THE END. PLZ WRITE SOMETHING ️️
10 YEARS... IVE BEEN WAITING FIR THE END. PLZ WRITE SOMETHING ️️
1/24/2016 c23 tbs0147
Love this story! I've literally just binge read the whole thing haha you're great and I love her inner monologues :P Please update soon! :) :)
Love this story! I've literally just binge read the whole thing haha you're great and I love her inner monologues :P Please update soon! :) :)
1/20/2016 c12 OscarJLaw
We all are getting desperate for that update pinkmist !.I hope you're alive and well tough.
Just write something.
ANYTHING on Brent and Adelle.
We all are getting desperate for that update pinkmist !.I hope you're alive and well tough.
Just write something.
ANYTHING on Brent and Adelle.
1/18/2016 c1 Cass
The mere fact that up to this DAY, someone still reviews that isn't me...
HAHA happy new year my friend! Please do us a HUUUUGE favor and unearth yourself off your writer's block and write Brent and Adelle again. I certainly missed reading stuff about them.
Hello, from the other side. 3
The mere fact that up to this DAY, someone still reviews that isn't me...
HAHA happy new year my friend! Please do us a HUUUUGE favor and unearth yourself off your writer's block and write Brent and Adelle again. I certainly missed reading stuff about them.
Hello, from the other side. 3
1/16/2016 c23 Gentlewater
i was hoping the action would do the talking... Such a teased, they have great chemistry sexual chemistry they want each other, they're waiting for that moment when it happen again. But why the drag? anyhow, great characters, especially brent. I don't know how you can pull this off with the next chapter. Hope you can come up with a great idea. You are an amazing writer! Please don't get lost ... Brent and Adelle want the readers know what happen to them at the end.
i was hoping the action would do the talking... Such a teased, they have great chemistry sexual chemistry they want each other, they're waiting for that moment when it happen again. But why the drag? anyhow, great characters, especially brent. I don't know how you can pull this off with the next chapter. Hope you can come up with a great idea. You are an amazing writer! Please don't get lost ... Brent and Adelle want the readers know what happen to them at the end.
1/14/2016 c22 1Damned to heaven
No, no, no! Why do I do this to myself?! I read the whole thing again and again knowing it's not finished and there's more to come...well, at least that chapter was pretty much perfect. Oh man, I just love how they're so them even when they're delivering those speeches and have those chick flick-esque moments.
Now I wonder what's gonna be their bust up, I mean they like each other and that's all great now I'm just dreading that bit in the story where something goes horribly wrong/is grossly misinterpreted and they all have to be on the outs for awhile. If only there's just rode off into the sunset, and Malcolm and Lori disappeared.
Hopefully 2016 is one of change, ahem. Just kidding, kinda...I mean updates would be great but at least you haven't given up on this story so yeah...hopefully see you soon?
1Damned to heavenNo, no, no! Why do I do this to myself?! I read the whole thing again and again knowing it's not finished and there's more to come...well, at least that chapter was pretty much perfect. Oh man, I just love how they're so them even when they're delivering those speeches and have those chick flick-esque moments.
Now I wonder what's gonna be their bust up, I mean they like each other and that's all great now I'm just dreading that bit in the story where something goes horribly wrong/is grossly misinterpreted and they all have to be on the outs for awhile. If only there's just rode off into the sunset, and Malcolm and Lori disappeared.
Hopefully 2016 is one of change, ahem. Just kidding, kinda...I mean updates would be great but at least you haven't given up on this story so yeah...hopefully see you soon?