for Chemical Reactions6/29/2006 c1 
27Apoc Genesis
Aw, this was really sweet. Seeing it from the mind of the artist rather than the mind of the girl brought out the great descriptive qualities of this piece.
Just one small thing though; saying "male and female" for "man and woman" reminds me too much of a scientist, and it dosent really fit the character i dont think, especially for a romance.
Other than that, great stuff as usual. Hope to see more soon!
27Apoc GenesisAw, this was really sweet. Seeing it from the mind of the artist rather than the mind of the girl brought out the great descriptive qualities of this piece.
Just one small thing though; saying "male and female" for "man and woman" reminds me too much of a scientist, and it dosent really fit the character i dont think, especially for a romance.
Other than that, great stuff as usual. Hope to see more soon!