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7/1/2006 c1 Please Deactivate
Isn't it amazing what some people, not just men, cannot see?I can relate to this poem, unfortuantely. However, I succeeded where some would not. Thank you very much for your review and I hope you find the time to read more of my works!~Single Black Rose aka Rose
6/30/2006 c1 14granny panties
The repetition at the end is excellent. I can almost feel your... frustration, I suppose, toward the situation. Great job.
6/29/2006 c1 36Louis Xavier
I'm glad you put this up as is. I think it is wonderful and I know that it conveys your feelings and your right, in reading it, you do sypmathize with the subjects, especially his sister. I don't claim to know anything about the situation but I know you. So I know that if you see something, maybe he should open his eyes and open himself up to what you see. I think you should most def send this. If you care, then care to make a change for the better. I know you'll do what you think is right. Keep it up because people listen to you :-)

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