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1/11/2010 c1 jmpdk3
Hi Poetic Ragdoll,

"Broken" is a profound poem that accurately describes the emotions during and after a breakup. I could feel your pain and sadness in your words as well as visualize how broken you had become. The ending was a surprise, an impressive and enjoyable one that really clinched my appreciation of the poem. Very well done!
9/30/2006 c1 Bryan
DEEP!
6/29/2006 c1 19Nyte Shade
This is good...I love the bluntness of certain lines

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