for Theory of Loveativity7/10/2006 c1 With Rhyme and Reason
Heh. Pretty funny. I don't like the twist at the end, though, because it kind of adds a dark cloud over the whole thing: there's no such thing as love because someone's always being deceived. Great ideas, though, on love. Great, really. Aliens. Ha.
J
Heh. Pretty funny. I don't like the twist at the end, though, because it kind of adds a dark cloud over the whole thing: there's no such thing as love because someone's always being deceived. Great ideas, though, on love. Great, really. Aliens. Ha.
J
7/2/2006 c1 
1Rock Andorra
Well written. I'm not sure I completely buy Tracy's motivation. Can someone really love another person and NEVER tell them? Seems like she would be miserable. I would have brought out some sadness in her when the other girl brought it up.Perhaps you could hint at a fear of rejection or some other type deep seated reason.
1Rock AndorraWell written. I'm not sure I completely buy Tracy's motivation. Can someone really love another person and NEVER tell them? Seems like she would be miserable. I would have brought out some sadness in her when the other girl brought it up.Perhaps you could hint at a fear of rejection or some other type deep seated reason.
7/1/2006 c1 5darkdemonsunday
I'm guess that's all there is... Of course I loved it. You certainly come up with some interesting names.
Can't say I wasn't expecting the twist you put at the end, but that's the only gripe I have about it. Otherwise, great.
5darkdemonsundayI'm guess that's all there is... Of course I loved it. You certainly come up with some interesting names.
Can't say I wasn't expecting the twist you put at the end, but that's the only gripe I have about it. Otherwise, great.