for Pet7/12/2006 c1 
194Aslan Israel
You make 'darling' sound so ... evil. but so delicious at the same time. Very nice!
194Aslan IsraelYou make 'darling' sound so ... evil. but so delicious at the same time. Very nice!
7/2/2006 c1 97rust phoenix
This is a beautiful poem, you put a lot of emotion into it. I really liked the rhythrm you used. The stanza and the last two verses were especially haunting.
97rust phoenixThis is a beautiful poem, you put a lot of emotion into it. I really liked the rhythrm you used. The stanza and the last two verses were especially haunting.
7/2/2006 c1 hye
...whatever happened 2 ur happy poems? the happy poems you used to write! T_T well it's good...but i love diana happy too!
~hye
...whatever happened 2 ur happy poems? the happy poems you used to write! T_T well it's good...but i love diana happy too!
~hye
7/1/2006 c1 5darknessblooms
Very nice...although the rhyme was a little rough in a couple of parts. I love the italicized stanza. Nice job.
5darknessbloomsVery nice...although the rhyme was a little rough in a couple of parts. I love the italicized stanza. Nice job.
7/1/2006 c1 Rono
I really liked how you used the stanza at the beginning and the end. I just love everything in this one..hmm..I think this one is a favorite!
I really liked how you used the stanza at the beginning and the end. I just love everything in this one..hmm..I think this one is a favorite!