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6/16/2007 c1 67Helpless-Dreamer01
"No dillusions within this mind; If this is me, than who am i?" hate to say it but this is how i feel almost everyday. Trying to be someone else to keep everyone happy. To be the STRONG one and not the one that falls easy... had to say it.. Member I loves you hehe! And I'm not fake round you guys... sometimes... Only when im sad i am.. if that makes sense.

Excellent piece lyssypoo! hehe...

Loves ya, Dani xoxo
12/2/2006 c1 Alyssa's Attic
Wonderful and powerful imagery here, i can relate to it as well, great job- Alyssa
7/7/2006 c1 24The FiboNACHI Sequence
hey lyss, this is really intense. very dark with great rhythm...

BUT...

you cahnge the rhyming scheme halfway through, plus you didn't paragrahp the change. it makes reading it stilted and a bit hard.

Still, very awesome, very intense and one of my faves.

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