
8/23/2006 c1
99your scripted romance
I liked this a lot, the flow of it was really nice. My favorite stanza was the second one, which I'm too lazy to type out. Fantastic.

I liked this a lot, the flow of it was really nice. My favorite stanza was the second one, which I'm too lazy to type out. Fantastic.
7/30/2006 c1
21akaSummer
I like this. I'd be really interested in knowing if it's going anywhere, like, if it was going to be a part of a collection of poems or something. Very good use of color and imagery.

I like this. I'd be really interested in knowing if it's going anywhere, like, if it was going to be a part of a collection of poems or something. Very good use of color and imagery.
7/6/2006 c1
612simpleplan13
interesting way to bring the beginning and end together.. I like it.. i also like the whole numbers writing thing.. well done

interesting way to bring the beginning and end together.. I like it.. i also like the whole numbers writing thing.. well done
7/3/2006 c1
25cornered.sensations
The hidden meaning is woven so well into this piece. Good work, I enjoyed this.

The hidden meaning is woven so well into this piece. Good work, I enjoyed this.
7/2/2006 c1 sylvia's syndrome
I love your diction in this piece. You really use it well to create lasting images. I like the casualness of this poem as well. It gives the poem a sort of ‘well, here are my thoughts’ feeling as opposed to a ‘look at the pretty words I can use’ feeling. I’m not sure I’m being very coherent, so I’ll just end this review by saying I really enjoyed this piece. Keep up the good work.
I love your diction in this piece. You really use it well to create lasting images. I like the casualness of this poem as well. It gives the poem a sort of ‘well, here are my thoughts’ feeling as opposed to a ‘look at the pretty words I can use’ feeling. I’m not sure I’m being very coherent, so I’ll just end this review by saying I really enjoyed this piece. Keep up the good work.