7/3/2006 c1 41Cade Foster
Wow...excellent poem. I feel inferior to your writing skills. Haha but seriously, great job.
Wow...excellent poem. I feel inferior to your writing skills. Haha but seriously, great job.
7/2/2006 c1 x account closed x
Awesome!I love how you made this funny and amsuing, yets serious and a bit of that "been through this already" all at the same time. I've never had to buy a car but have gone with many reletives and you captured it perfectly :) Great piece of work!
Awesome!I love how you made this funny and amsuing, yets serious and a bit of that "been through this already" all at the same time. I've never had to buy a car but have gone with many reletives and you captured it perfectly :) Great piece of work!
7/2/2006 c1 19Jules Kelly
I've actually been out looking for a car to buy for the last few weeks, so this one really hit close to home. The repitition of "Come buy a car" is really effective, and it reminds me of those super annoying car commercials that are always on TV. I do think that the poem went on a little too long, but that's my only real problem with it.
I've actually been out looking for a car to buy for the last few weeks, so this one really hit close to home. The repitition of "Come buy a car" is really effective, and it reminds me of those super annoying car commercials that are always on TV. I do think that the poem went on a little too long, but that's my only real problem with it.