7/3/2006 c1 Andrew
So I just figured out I can leave a thing here too, so that's what I'll do. I've been writing since I was thirteen years old, I've mostly moved from halfway-finished books and stories to poetry, but I still greatly appreciate a good story. The first step is to have a good idea and present it in such a fashion that keeps the reader's attention, which you have done marvelously. The only complaint I have, and it is a miniscule one at best, is that you should perhaps read over your stories a little bit more, to check for grammar and presentation. You have a distinct way you seem to want to write and there are just a few places where the words seemed to stumble in my head because of the way something was said. Only a few though. Overall, I really like the way you think and the way you put this together. Very impressive.