for Anger7/19/2006 c1 
35Infinity Plus One
I admire the oblong shape of this poem. I also admire the short sentences and use of half-rhymes and short, snappy words.
35Infinity Plus OneI admire the oblong shape of this poem. I also admire the short sentences and use of half-rhymes and short, snappy words.
7/3/2006 c1 Mckenzie Drestire
Hey dude, can totally relate with this. A friend of mine ditched me the second uni started, then when it ended and all her new friends went home she came back to me, it's been six months of excuses and no shows and i'm sick of it because once she gets those blond idiots back she wont want 'the goth' anymore. Good job, simple language and good use of rhyme, i know we've all been here before, keep up the good work.
Peace out Kenzie
Hey dude, can totally relate with this. A friend of mine ditched me the second uni started, then when it ended and all her new friends went home she came back to me, it's been six months of excuses and no shows and i'm sick of it because once she gets those blond idiots back she wont want 'the goth' anymore. Good job, simple language and good use of rhyme, i know we've all been here before, keep up the good work.
Peace out Kenzie