Reviews: visible summer exhalation

8/21/2006 c1

144chaos called creation
when i read this i think about clarity. it's really something.

7/30/2006 c1

88crisscross-cat
The langauge is nice, but it's overtaken by the fancy spacing and messing around with fonts. I think you overdid it a bit in that area. It's nice in its simplicity, and I don't think you need to make the words look pretty to have a pretty poem.

7/5/2006 c1

24wind up car in motion
"i feel like we're the brightest thing in the world right now"