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4/26/2021 c1 annasthesia
Awesome story you got here! I like how the plot is going. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
11/7/2008 c3 12SuzannaR
Really nice so far. I hope you keep updating!
7/28/2006 c2 1TalesOfOld
Another good chapter! I especially like how you added in the Lakota words! No worries about the melodrama, it wasn't major, but just something to be careful of. Update soon! :)
7/6/2006 c1 TalesOfOld
Great idea you've got going! It looks like it's going to be good! The only things I can see that might need improvement is 1. Beware of melodrama in emotional scenes. 2. The way that everything seems to be the same on the ranch is a little odd. Most ranches are constantly being added to or rebuilt, so maybe you might mention where it's changed? Great story though, update soon!

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