for Her Ashes8/27/2006 c5 
9Bleeding Air
...you sit on a throne of lies...
haha. mk. every time i use the word "enigma" you ask me what it is. like- got it memorized? (I quoted KINGDOMHEARTS2 but YOU dont KNOW that HA ha)
ho man. at the beginning, i thought stain grabbed eire's hair, not her hand. & i was like, ohk that's rude. like wtf.
& the balcony thing was rather random. though i have a feeling.. (i need sexual healing) that LUCIFAH had something to do with it. with his voodoo mind powers. or he sent his monkey's with wings, like in the wiz of oz, to gnaw the balcony legs right off. yehs.
I ALWAYS FEEL LIKE. SOMEBODY'S WATCHING ME. E. E. E. E.
does someone want her. d.e.a.d. someone like lucy.
star wars 2 is on. it's flipping ridiculous. she's getting married to the soon-to-be-evil boy. DARTH VADER. uhm it's called star wars, right?
there are so many star whatever shows out there. like star trek. star ocean. well thats a game. uhm. battle star galactica. DUNDUN. um. like. that's all i know. star fish?
i think eire went a lil too emo there. i mean i understand the whole concept of nearly dying & all, but everyone has near-death experiences & they're usually more.. refined. as in. i will not waste my time dwelling & instead will get over it & LIVE. -hardass-
it was cute how they established their lil spot though. WE WILL CHILL HERE LIKE PENGUINS. -truce-
& lein's cute. she has retarded moments- "DON'T YOU SCOOP YO CEREAL UP WITH YO LEFT HAND, BITCH. IT'S SATANIC." like ohkhk.
flick's girlfriend is more retarded though. like.. in reality, someone would shoot her. with a .22 or something. she's.. er. cute though. just. ridiculously dumb. ISN'T HE A DARLING? AIRPLANE NOISES!
the cool ducks? that's uncharacteristic of him. LOL. wow.
IN FIELDS WHERE NOTHING GREW BUT WEEDS, I FOUND A FLOWER AT MY FEET. -harvests-
im going to beddy bye early tonight, cuz school oh school. OH SCHOOL. skool. skewl. schoo'. -fags out-
9Bleeding Air...you sit on a throne of lies...
haha. mk. every time i use the word "enigma" you ask me what it is. like- got it memorized? (I quoted KINGDOMHEARTS2 but YOU dont KNOW that HA ha)
ho man. at the beginning, i thought stain grabbed eire's hair, not her hand. & i was like, ohk that's rude. like wtf.
& the balcony thing was rather random. though i have a feeling.. (i need sexual healing) that LUCIFAH had something to do with it. with his voodoo mind powers. or he sent his monkey's with wings, like in the wiz of oz, to gnaw the balcony legs right off. yehs.
I ALWAYS FEEL LIKE. SOMEBODY'S WATCHING ME. E. E. E. E.
does someone want her. d.e.a.d. someone like lucy.
star wars 2 is on. it's flipping ridiculous. she's getting married to the soon-to-be-evil boy. DARTH VADER. uhm it's called star wars, right?
there are so many star whatever shows out there. like star trek. star ocean. well thats a game. uhm. battle star galactica. DUNDUN. um. like. that's all i know. star fish?
i think eire went a lil too emo there. i mean i understand the whole concept of nearly dying & all, but everyone has near-death experiences & they're usually more.. refined. as in. i will not waste my time dwelling & instead will get over it & LIVE. -hardass-
it was cute how they established their lil spot though. WE WILL CHILL HERE LIKE PENGUINS. -truce-
& lein's cute. she has retarded moments- "DON'T YOU SCOOP YO CEREAL UP WITH YO LEFT HAND, BITCH. IT'S SATANIC." like ohkhk.
flick's girlfriend is more retarded though. like.. in reality, someone would shoot her. with a .22 or something. she's.. er. cute though. just. ridiculously dumb. ISN'T HE A DARLING? AIRPLANE NOISES!
the cool ducks? that's uncharacteristic of him. LOL. wow.
IN FIELDS WHERE NOTHING GREW BUT WEEDS, I FOUND A FLOWER AT MY FEET. -harvests-
im going to beddy bye early tonight, cuz school oh school. OH SCHOOL. skool. skewl. schoo'. -fags out-
8/27/2006 c5 you're so postmodern
Wow, Eire was clingy in this chapter. Very teary-eyed. That's weird but thats Eire for you. It makes me very suspicious of her in this chap.
Flick's girlfriend is hilarious. The aeroplane noises? LOL!
The characters so far are likable. Even superstitious Lein.
Keep it up!
Wow, Eire was clingy in this chapter. Very teary-eyed. That's weird but thats Eire for you. It makes me very suspicious of her in this chap.
Flick's girlfriend is hilarious. The aeroplane noises? LOL!
The characters so far are likable. Even superstitious Lein.
Keep it up!
8/26/2006 c5 4Slideshow
Eire was too much of a sobby-clingy-smack-that-beeotch in this chapter. -sniff- Stain should run away. Lein is actually adorable now that I think about her. Her cleaning, her superstition, her religion. EVILEVIL! Oh how awful, I wish he wouldn't go around with Eire. But that can't be helped, can it? It's the plot. Hmm...
Kk. Um. It's like 9 in the morning and I'm in my uber nerd mode. So. I have to go eat. Because I'm hungry. But I don't want to eat.
Flick's girlfriend is funny. Aeroplane noises as she feeds him? HAHAHAH. Dork. Dork. Dork. Dork.
I like his bandmates, love.
Don't kill them. :((
4SlideshowEire was too much of a sobby-clingy-smack-that-beeotch in this chapter. -sniff- Stain should run away. Lein is actually adorable now that I think about her. Her cleaning, her superstition, her religion. EVILEVIL! Oh how awful, I wish he wouldn't go around with Eire. But that can't be helped, can it? It's the plot. Hmm...
Kk. Um. It's like 9 in the morning and I'm in my uber nerd mode. So. I have to go eat. Because I'm hungry. But I don't want to eat.
Flick's girlfriend is funny. Aeroplane noises as she feeds him? HAHAHAH. Dork. Dork. Dork. Dork.
I like his bandmates, love.
Don't kill them. :((
8/26/2006 c4 Slideshow
You're so morbid. Haha. Eire is definitely getting on my nerves now. She's sounds evil. Kill. Yeah, yeah. It sounds like she kills whoever comes into contact with her. Scary.
Well she better not kill Stain. Or um. Yeah. Does she die? Does she? Does she? Please? Like gruesomely? Or twist her death with irony.
BABE.
lotsaluff.
You're so morbid. Haha. Eire is definitely getting on my nerves now. She's sounds evil. Kill. Yeah, yeah. It sounds like she kills whoever comes into contact with her. Scary.
Well she better not kill Stain. Or um. Yeah. Does she die? Does she? Does she? Please? Like gruesomely? Or twist her death with irony.
BABE.
lotsaluff.
8/26/2006 c3 Slideshow
DSGKLGJDSSF WHAT THE EFF? :"Cantt was murdered last night." "That's unexpected."
HAHAHAHAHAHAH. Dude, does he not care? HAHA. I thought they were friends.
Man, all of these time's you keep putting in is making me curious. I likey. It makes everything seem a little more foreboding. Kind of like, not enough time left of something. Oowee, the suspense, kitty! Meow. I like Crydon. The whole situation with Eire and Crydon. It's amusing!
(k)
DSGKLGJDSSF WHAT THE EFF? :"Cantt was murdered last night." "That's unexpected."
HAHAHAHAHAHAH. Dude, does he not care? HAHA. I thought they were friends.
Man, all of these time's you keep putting in is making me curious. I likey. It makes everything seem a little more foreboding. Kind of like, not enough time left of something. Oowee, the suspense, kitty! Meow. I like Crydon. The whole situation with Eire and Crydon. It's amusing!
(k)
8/26/2006 c2 Slideshow
he's cheating on his girlfriend! tsk, tsk. Poor, weird Lein. Eire is kind of weird, too. But Stain makes up for it so NA.
i adore your writing, lovey.take care paagal.;)
he's cheating on his girlfriend! tsk, tsk. Poor, weird Lein. Eire is kind of weird, too. But Stain makes up for it so NA.
i adore your writing, lovey.take care paagal.;)
8/25/2006 c5 40Death Princess
i was going to make this an unsigned review but last night i had a dream that the more signed reviews u give, when u reach the 600th 1 u get a prize so i thought i'd leave a signed 1. im hungry. i can smell cake. this one wasn't as funny as usual. it was more serious esque. i hve sum complaints. i'l go knock on ur door now. im hungry.
40Death Princessi was going to make this an unsigned review but last night i had a dream that the more signed reviews u give, when u reach the 600th 1 u get a prize so i thought i'd leave a signed 1. im hungry. i can smell cake. this one wasn't as funny as usual. it was more serious esque. i hve sum complaints. i'l go knock on ur door now. im hungry.
8/25/2006 c5 JP-Cassidy
As always an excellent job with the chapter. I like the flashback, funny siuation in a somewhat sarcastic and morbid way, it is.
Well, you left the story open for more... so I guess I'll just have to wait again. Heheh. Peace!
As always an excellent job with the chapter. I like the flashback, funny siuation in a somewhat sarcastic and morbid way, it is.
Well, you left the story open for more... so I guess I'll just have to wait again. Heheh. Peace!
8/25/2006 c5 toxic-noodle725
lein is such an angel. i hope eire doesnt catch stain's eyes. lein doesnt deserve that. flick's love life is hilarious. i liked the flashback. though flick's kinda creepy. yea cliffhangers are fun to write. i only write em in peotry. im more of a poet rather than an author. though i hope someday i'll be able to write sumthin. khenyways, update!
lein is such an angel. i hope eire doesnt catch stain's eyes. lein doesnt deserve that. flick's love life is hilarious. i liked the flashback. though flick's kinda creepy. yea cliffhangers are fun to write. i only write em in peotry. im more of a poet rather than an author. though i hope someday i'll be able to write sumthin. khenyways, update!
8/20/2006 c4 Guest
So I definitely didn't understand that begininng part. Was it a flashback? I kept thinking it was some sort of future reference, but that doesn't really make sense. So now I'm completely confused.
What is up with Lucifer? I don't understand him. The moment with the band was pretty funny: a little humor to lighten up the situation. I love those band guys. Hopefully they won't die any time in the near future. Actually, now that I think about it, why is the band name Her Ashes? Does it have something to do with the beginning part?
Haha, Marigold. She makes me laugh. Interesting conversation they had about Cain and Abel, though I have to wonder why Eire brought it up. She's suspicious. And then the railing broke, which is even more suspicious. You're pretty good at those cliffhangers.
So I definitely didn't understand that begininng part. Was it a flashback? I kept thinking it was some sort of future reference, but that doesn't really make sense. So now I'm completely confused.
What is up with Lucifer? I don't understand him. The moment with the band was pretty funny: a little humor to lighten up the situation. I love those band guys. Hopefully they won't die any time in the near future. Actually, now that I think about it, why is the band name Her Ashes? Does it have something to do with the beginning part?
Haha, Marigold. She makes me laugh. Interesting conversation they had about Cain and Abel, though I have to wonder why Eire brought it up. She's suspicious. And then the railing broke, which is even more suspicious. You're pretty good at those cliffhangers.
8/20/2006 c3 Guest
I think Stain did it. He seemed way too detached when he heard the news. Either that or he knew about it beforehand. What's weird is all their reactions were slightly weird for the situation. It's like they didn't care about Cantt.
Interesting part with the apples...I think Eire is trying to get Stain in trouble. And who is this Crydon guy? He confuses me.
You make the time seem very important. I can't figure out why though.
I think Stain did it. He seemed way too detached when he heard the news. Either that or he knew about it beforehand. What's weird is all their reactions were slightly weird for the situation. It's like they didn't care about Cantt.
Interesting part with the apples...I think Eire is trying to get Stain in trouble. And who is this Crydon guy? He confuses me.
You make the time seem very important. I can't figure out why though.
8/20/2006 c2 Guest
So this chapter was definitely a lot longer than the other one. I liked the begininng, with the fireworks: it was cute to see them talking to each other.
I don't really like Lein though: she seems like a very over dramatic person and I'm curious to see how Stain met her because of her personality. She seems overbearing to me.
Ha, I like Flick. And I don't know why, but the first thing I thought of when I saw the taxi driver murdered thing was Eire. Basically because she needed a ride. It's a stupid connection.
Stain seems to like destiny. And I wonder where Eire wanted to take him? She's very spontaneous.
So this chapter was definitely a lot longer than the other one. I liked the begininng, with the fireworks: it was cute to see them talking to each other.
I don't really like Lein though: she seems like a very over dramatic person and I'm curious to see how Stain met her because of her personality. She seems overbearing to me.
Ha, I like Flick. And I don't know why, but the first thing I thought of when I saw the taxi driver murdered thing was Eire. Basically because she needed a ride. It's a stupid connection.
Stain seems to like destiny. And I wonder where Eire wanted to take him? She's very spontaneous.
8/20/2006 c1 Guest
Well I definitely like Stain more that I liked Jason. He's cool. Although I must admit, with that beginning I thought he was going to be late for like a murder or something. But then he was in a band, so no dying today.
I think I like Eire, too. She seems a little bit weird to me, but other than that she's okay. And the way you write this is gorgeous, seriously. I like how you detail the expressions and what the characters are doing.
Well I definitely like Stain more that I liked Jason. He's cool. Although I must admit, with that beginning I thought he was going to be late for like a murder or something. But then he was in a band, so no dying today.
I think I like Eire, too. She seems a little bit weird to me, but other than that she's okay. And the way you write this is gorgeous, seriously. I like how you detail the expressions and what the characters are doing.
8/19/2006 c4 toxic-noodle725
wo. u end it at the best cliff hangers...good but frustrating. oh well theres another chappie to read. so im really interested in the whole adam and eve bit. so yea. great chapter.
wo. u end it at the best cliff hangers...good but frustrating. oh well theres another chappie to read. so im really interested in the whole adam and eve bit. so yea. great chapter.