for What If?7/4/2006 c1 
64Leeona Trance
Aw... the same thing happens to me when I think or write about my grandparents.
This poem was very touching. I love it ^.^
~Leeona Trance
64Leeona TranceAw... the same thing happens to me when I think or write about my grandparents.
This poem was very touching. I love it ^.^
~Leeona Trance
7/3/2006 c1 37TaltushMeiMei
Oh, it's beautiful. And amazing. And now I suddenly want to cry... (I've been crying a lot lately, because my favorite character in the book I'm reading just died... it doesn't take very much to get me crying, :)) The way it's written, with the relatively short sentences and then the really long ones is perfect. And just this whole poem is great. The flow, the word choice, the format... everything. Great.
37TaltushMeiMeiOh, it's beautiful. And amazing. And now I suddenly want to cry... (I've been crying a lot lately, because my favorite character in the book I'm reading just died... it doesn't take very much to get me crying, :)) The way it's written, with the relatively short sentences and then the really long ones is perfect. And just this whole poem is great. The flow, the word choice, the format... everything. Great.