for A Gift in Disguise7/3/2006 c1 
131theory of black
You captured the emotion very well. I love how it was face paced and yet the reader got something out of it. Nicely done.
131theory of blackYou captured the emotion very well. I love how it was face paced and yet the reader got something out of it. Nicely done.
7/3/2006 c1 37TaltushMeiMei
The sad thing is, that some people are forgetting. And the moment that happens, it's bound to happen again. Maybe not with us Jews, but some other group, nationality, or people who think a certain way. This is a pretty deep poem, and I really like it. I like the structure, if that makes sense. It probably doesn't, but I do. It's built nicely. The flow... It's really good.
37TaltushMeiMeiThe sad thing is, that some people are forgetting. And the moment that happens, it's bound to happen again. Maybe not with us Jews, but some other group, nationality, or people who think a certain way. This is a pretty deep poem, and I really like it. I like the structure, if that makes sense. It probably doesn't, but I do. It's built nicely. The flow... It's really good.