for New York City Love7/7/2006 c5 ritsu-chan
MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Now, I'm not exactly sure which story it was that you wanted me to read, but I'll R+R all of them! ^_~Tee hee... kinky... funny word... -_-Love the -well, the love!
MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Now, I'm not exactly sure which story it was that you wanted me to read, but I'll R+R all of them! ^_~Tee hee... kinky... funny word... -_-Love the -well, the love!
7/4/2006 c1 Rafaelle Jones-Parker
Yeah. Over all it's pretty good actually! I like it. Except in the beginning, you kind of have problems with your tenses. ;) It's okay. Just keep it constant. (Sorry for the grammar lessons. :X)
Yeah. Over all it's pretty good actually! I like it. Except in the beginning, you kind of have problems with your tenses. ;) It's okay. Just keep it constant. (Sorry for the grammar lessons. :X)