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9/10/2012 c22 Angelbaby1991
Great Story!
4/3/2012 c22 1streetracer-2012

I love how sweet Andrew and Maria are together!

love and all the mushy stuff,

5/9/2011 c22 2MuffinsRoxSox
I like Bright. He's awesome. Look, I am super tired right now, and my mind is trying to shut down, so, I'm just going to leave this with a that was wonderfully terrific. And again, I'm really tired, so I'm going to go. See ya.
12/19/2010 c22 3AJS
Hmm... I feel like this story didn't really have much of a focused plot. I guess I didn't really get into it though, mainly because I didn't really like Maria's character. I found her pretty annoying at times, especially like when she was badgering Bright about getting back together with Brooke. It just seemed like she was justifying Brooke's cheating, which you can't really do, and then she wasn't only telling Bright, but she was really forcing that opinion on him. She did the same thing in other situations too.

There were also just way too many things going on, and the plot seemed to change constantly. Like it wasn't even just about her and Andrew, but other things as well. Maybe if you focused on one thing and really tuned into it it would have been better. Also Maria's relationship with her dad was kind of hard too, since we never really had a perception of what their relationship was like before the actual crash. Were they close? Was it just the crash that tore them apart or had it always been like that? I guess it didn't really feel like I cared much about that aspect of the story. I think overall more development of the plot, storyline, and characters would have helped get the readers into the story.

- Alyssa
7/28/2010 c22 lifeofshadow
I know the story is over, but I just wanted to let you know that I read this whole story in one day; I just couldn't stop.

Good job! The characters were pretty realistic (not too amazing though, you could def work on that. Jack was sorta iffy), the plot was entertaining and kept me reading, and your descriptions were beautiful.

Thanks for writing it!
7/16/2010 c22 cheesecake15
really enoyed your story!

i love the song 'sick cycle carousel' i was listening to it the other day, the title of your story caught my eye, then i read the summary and had to read it :) i loved the plot, her dad is a bloody barstard!

anywho's well done on your story . xx .
4/1/2010 c1 1Finite Sky
I really like this so far. I can understand how Maria feels. The scars are the permanent reminder of the accident. On to read chapter two now... :)
10/12/2009 c6 J. C. Hunter
6/22/2009 c22 2Devilish Kisses
Great story!
6/22/2009 c19 Devilish Kisses
Aww, Andrew and Maria are so cute together! This is a great story!
6/21/2009 c5 Devilish Kisses
Lol, Lifehouse songs three chapters in a row! It's cool, they're awesome-the band and the chapters. This story's really good!
5/28/2009 c22 3DarkGoddess3
I really enjoyed reading this story. I think what makes it such a good story is because it has some real depth to it. I could really understand the emotions of the characters. If I was ever in the same situation as Maria I would probly feel the same exact way as her and that made me get really wrapped up in the story so I couldn't stop reading until I finished it.
5/9/2009 c6 ookami-tamashii
omg XD i love your story so far :D ive laughed my ass off and ive teared up. the emotions are completely raw and i feel like i am Maria XD your an amazing writer :D
3/27/2009 c22 Erica71167
Great story! I think I'm in love with Andrew and Bright. Great characters.
3/18/2009 c22 sunshinecmnl
At first i wanted Maria to end up with Bright, but after seeing how he was the one to encourage Maria to go and get Andrew, i kinda changed my mind. i never thought that Bright would do something like that because i thought he likes Maria.. he's really kind :P i didn't expect the thing with Bright and Brooke suddenly dating but they make a really good match except the fact that Brooke cheated on Bright.. Maria and Andrew loves each other so much! nice story :D
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