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7/25/2007 c1 1Motown
my first ever friend was an older boy who was allergic to tree nuts, seafood, dairy, cats, dogs, bees, penicilin, and had asthma. we were best buds.
8/19/2006 c2 2Charmarie
Cool story. It's really realistic. You should've gotten more reviews than this. Anyways, this is rally good. Looking forward to your next chapters in this story.
7/11/2006 c2 4sofiya05

wow the kid's really perceptive for a 4 yr old...she is 4 right? but you've got an interesting start and can't wait to see more of it.

To be honest, i thought that the older sibling was a boy at first but yeah... anyways update soon.

7/6/2006 c1 17Rayne Logan
Wow... that's pretty weird that you just reviewed my story... you psychic or something? :P

I was just reading yours - Once Upon A Time.. You Belonged - and I must say its pretty good. ^^ The only thing I'm not too sure about is the use of 2nd person... the "You", it's a good change for a story, and gets the reader involved in the plot, but after a while, it might get a little tedious.

I love the plot though. And I can actually relate to the characters, as can quite a lot of people, I have a younger sibling myself, and yes... I did get ignored when she was younger, and I still do a little.

Keep up the good work ^^

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