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7/6/2006 c1 51drippingdreams
Stormy emotions, how appropriate for a thunderstorm writing. :) I like "well, the stars have defied them." It's a neat style, and I rather like it. I also like "here's to the times when we both fell to fast" followed by "may you rise again and never hit the ground." I think the sentences about "a plotline that lead you" should be "leads" (subject-verb agreement, you know... ah, those technicalities), but other than that, no critique! Very nice job combining turmoil with halves of memories.

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