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7/7/2006 c1 44Joshua Hartman
The differing rhyme schemes in stanza two and four threw me off. It would make sense if two and four differed from one and three, but two and four are diffrent from each other. This might have been your intent, but it isn't clear from my standpoint. It's a very good premise for a poem. Watching the rejection of the one who rejected. Good job.

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