for Mr Teddy Bear11/5/2006 c1 Danika C
I really like the context of this poem, i love how its written from a childs perspective. it's almost as if you're there with the writer with her teddy bear listening to her talk to the teddy. It made me tear up a little bit. it really makes you think, makes you see that a teddy bear can mean the entire world to someone, that simple things can help, oh i make no sense, i loved it.
I really like the context of this poem, i love how its written from a childs perspective. it's almost as if you're there with the writer with her teddy bear listening to her talk to the teddy. It made me tear up a little bit. it really makes you think, makes you see that a teddy bear can mean the entire world to someone, that simple things can help, oh i make no sense, i loved it.
8/20/2006 c1 thousandwordsworthy
So sad. Both the poem and the reality.
So sad. Both the poem and the reality.
7/8/2006 c1 
104FunkyFlower
OMG! i am putting this on my favs, this is just so heart-wrenching! i am totally against child abuse and everytime i read something like this, it really touches my heart. thank you for writing this and the idea of the teddy bear was pure genius! love it:)
~mez~
104FunkyFlowerOMG! i am putting this on my favs, this is just so heart-wrenching! i am totally against child abuse and everytime i read something like this, it really touches my heart. thank you for writing this and the idea of the teddy bear was pure genius! love it:)
~mez~
7/8/2006 c1 30Puella Caeli
aww, this is so sweet and sad. poor kid and mr. teddy bear... definitely makes me hope they get that world of their own. poignant - nicely done!
30Puella Caeliaww, this is so sweet and sad. poor kid and mr. teddy bear... definitely makes me hope they get that world of their own. poignant - nicely done!