8/20/2006 c1 Thousandwordsworthy
Very nice. You capture the feelings of a dismal rainy day. How the rain can seem to wash away fears.

7/8/2006 c1 37La Vida
Beautiful. I loved how you wrote your inspiration down too but revealing that you were bored actually took away from an otherwise wonderful poem because I felt that I was more into it that you, the author was and that ends up making it meaningless to me too.