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3/3/2011 c1 20Twilight Starr
This one is very sad. I like the title. I think it's well-written. It really expresses feelings of hopelessness well. I can relate, which is why I am adding it to my favorites.
11/2/2010 c1 lymli
I like the starting, the way you compare diamonds with innocence.
6/24/2010 c1 243ShadowFane
I get this 100%. Beautifully written. :)

Fav's list! :D
5/18/2009 c1 Icyfire4w5
I have felt betrayed recently, but thanks to this poem, I realise that I am not alone. In fact, I have kinda calmed down.
6/8/2008 c1 4GrannyP
Oh fiddle, I was going to say that I liked a lot of the questions in this poem, but the reviewer before me already did that. Psh.

Well, you profile said not to read your poetry unless you are mentally unstable, which is why I read.
9/19/2006 c1 136LilLaTLuv
Hey!

Well, actually I was thinking of writing something similar to this, but this is very well done. I like all the questions. It shows a lot of emotion. Great job! KEEP WRITING!

Luv ya,Tashi :)

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