for Out of Israel12/8/2008 c3 
2MamiPapi
I was in an Amernian stall as well year end 2007. It's amazing to know that you've gone the same Old Jerusalem I have and feel the same way about their people and our Lord as I do.
Do you remember if the Armenian place had lemon and orange trees?
I wanna go back again.
2MamiPapiI was in an Amernian stall as well year end 2007. It's amazing to know that you've gone the same Old Jerusalem I have and feel the same way about their people and our Lord as I do.
Do you remember if the Armenian place had lemon and orange trees?
I wanna go back again.
11/25/2008 c2 Icyfire4w5
Gosh... I am awe-struck by this poem! I have never visited Jerusalem before, but now, I can sense its rich heritage.
Gosh... I am awe-struck by this poem! I have never visited Jerusalem before, but now, I can sense its rich heritage.
10/12/2007 c15 10miss-ellen
These were beautiful. I could suggest improvement and all that jazz, but your poems are perfect as they are; emotional, thought provoking. I wouldn't have you change them in any way.
And, on another note, for POGA - very uplifting to have such strong Christian leads, thank you.
God bless,
-Elli
10miss-ellenThese were beautiful. I could suggest improvement and all that jazz, but your poems are perfect as they are; emotional, thought provoking. I wouldn't have you change them in any way.
And, on another note, for POGA - very uplifting to have such strong Christian leads, thank you.
God bless,
-Elli
8/31/2007 c1 2Angela Loves
Your poetry collection is really helpful to me because I'm in thw works of writing a story that takes place in Israel - even though I've never been there before.
2Angela LovesYour poetry collection is really helpful to me because I'm in thw works of writing a story that takes place in Israel - even though I've never been there before.
5/27/2007 c15 kireinamichi
Hey, I just wanted to know if you traveled to West Bank or the Gaza Strip during your trip? Your poetry is flowing and peaceful, but I didn't understand too much of it... I'm not really religious, but I like your poems' formats!
Hey, I just wanted to know if you traveled to West Bank or the Gaza Strip during your trip? Your poetry is flowing and peaceful, but I didn't understand too much of it... I'm not really religious, but I like your poems' formats!
4/4/2007 c6 6midnightdee
I have tears in my eyes as soon as I finish this. I'm a catholic born and grew up in a muslim dominated coutry. My friends are from various religious background, muslim, christian, buddhist, and many more. We're great friends. We love each other. I don't understand why must people fight in the name of religion!
Great piece!
6midnightdeeI have tears in my eyes as soon as I finish this. I'm a catholic born and grew up in a muslim dominated coutry. My friends are from various religious background, muslim, christian, buddhist, and many more. We're great friends. We love each other. I don't understand why must people fight in the name of religion!
Great piece!
4/4/2007 c1 midnightdee
I love this...I love the title, I love the poem. Whenever I hear or read the story of Mary and Martha, I had never understood the message or maybe I never took time to understand it. But after reading your beutiful poem, I'm enlightened. Thank you.
I love this...I love the title, I love the poem. Whenever I hear or read the story of Mary and Martha, I had never understood the message or maybe I never took time to understand it. But after reading your beutiful poem, I'm enlightened. Thank you.
9/10/2006 c1 toxic-noodle725
what a beautiful poem. i greatly admire the fact that u went to israel and have written poems about it. even though im a muslim grl and ur poem speak of a christianity, i admire it. there are a lot of similarities that i can relate to but anyway, i think its amazing how u start of with "iam Mary not Martha..." it catches interest and pulls u into the poem. i liked the concept about it. overall its wonderfull. great job.
what a beautiful poem. i greatly admire the fact that u went to israel and have written poems about it. even though im a muslim grl and ur poem speak of a christianity, i admire it. there are a lot of similarities that i can relate to but anyway, i think its amazing how u start of with "iam Mary not Martha..." it catches interest and pulls u into the poem. i liked the concept about it. overall its wonderfull. great job.
8/29/2006 c10 8Written
beautiful. I've always wanted to go to israel, myself incidentally a muslim, but I doubt it will ever happen. lovely words and even though I'm not christian, I truly think your poetry is beautiful. thank you.
8Writtenbeautiful. I've always wanted to go to israel, myself incidentally a muslim, but I doubt it will ever happen. lovely words and even though I'm not christian, I truly think your poetry is beautiful. thank you.
8/21/2006 c1 8incandescente
i like this first poem.
i've learnt in bible study and sermons and such, about the different attitudes of martha and mary, but its really this moment that i'm caught anew in the knowledge.
when my lord is near, i revel in His presence.
(: thanks for this!
8incandescentei like this first poem.
i've learnt in bible study and sermons and such, about the different attitudes of martha and mary, but its really this moment that i'm caught anew in the knowledge.
when my lord is near, i revel in His presence.
(: thanks for this!
8/20/2006 c10 2Mae Choquette
Wow. This poem and the author's note afterwards gave me goosebumps. You are an amazing writer. Through your poems, I can feel God's inspiration.
2Mae ChoquetteWow. This poem and the author's note afterwards gave me goosebumps. You are an amazing writer. Through your poems, I can feel God's inspiration.
7/24/2006 c6 Freed by Mercy
Your poetry is so beautiful, so descriptive. You understand your subject. I have read the first 6 so far. My favorite ones are the Christmas Eve. poem and the Afternoon Prayers (btw, you mispelled prayer on the first line). Your author's note on this one gave me a lump in my throat. Also the short poem which happened at the Charismatic meeting was very movig. I have no doubt that it was the work of the Holy Spirit.
Thank you so much
Your poetry is so beautiful, so descriptive. You understand your subject. I have read the first 6 so far. My favorite ones are the Christmas Eve. poem and the Afternoon Prayers (btw, you mispelled prayer on the first line). Your author's note on this one gave me a lump in my throat. Also the short poem which happened at the Charismatic meeting was very movig. I have no doubt that it was the work of the Holy Spirit.
Thank you so much
7/20/2006 c1 5Raspberry Twirl
this piece had such a gentle tone. a lullaby. a poem. a song. a prayer. It's words are magic. They calm the mind the way chocolate calms our passions. lovely.
truly lovely.
5Raspberry Twirlthis piece had such a gentle tone. a lullaby. a poem. a song. a prayer. It's words are magic. They calm the mind the way chocolate calms our passions. lovely.
truly lovely.