for When It All Falls Down9/2/2012 c9 Jay
Keep on writing it is soooooooo good.
Keep on writing it is soooooooo good.
11/27/2011 c9 Fiona
when are you going to continue? IM DYIng heRE! :D please write another chapter. id love to see the story develop! :D
when are you going to continue? IM DYIng heRE! :D please write another chapter. id love to see the story develop! :D
8/11/2011 c2 lilmisstzalwyz3
hey im new to fictionpress nd i luvd the whle story cnt wait to read the rest of the story:-)
hey im new to fictionpress nd i luvd the whle story cnt wait to read the rest of the story:-)
7/3/2011 c1 Fiona
This is amazing! I love it! Btw how old are you? You sound like a teenager since your writing about this stuff, but just in case you know. Its so good? Has it got published yet? xx
This is amazing! I love it! Btw how old are you? You sound like a teenager since your writing about this stuff, but just in case you know. Its so good? Has it got published yet? xx
12/3/2010 c9 Girl
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7/2/2010 c1 savor those enticing dreams
I liked it. The plot line is creative, and interesting, and I like that she isn't your typical closet beautiful girl...she really is shy, throughout it all, and she's realistic.
i'm excited for the next chapter!
I liked it. The plot line is creative, and interesting, and I like that she isn't your typical closet beautiful girl...she really is shy, throughout it all, and she's realistic.
i'm excited for the next chapter!
6/3/2010 c1 
8PencilSketchS
Lol, this is the first het (MxF) story I've read in a while, and I enjoyed it a lot. My high school life was never this interesting, but you've described it well. Very nice beginning.
8PencilSketchSLol, this is the first het (MxF) story I've read in a while, and I enjoyed it a lot. My high school life was never this interesting, but you've described it well. Very nice beginning.
4/12/2010 c12 1B.R. Fox
This. Chapter. Is. EPIC. I loved it! Can't wait for the 13th! :D
Only thing I'm sad about, is theirs no Brandon in here. :(
1B.R. FoxThis. Chapter. Is. EPIC. I loved it! Can't wait for the 13th! :D
Only thing I'm sad about, is theirs no Brandon in here. :(
4/5/2010 c12 23thinking.about.thinking
Ella's characters is absolutely awesome, and I loved the "You wish." at the end. Loved this chapter, update soon!
~thinking.about.thinking
23thinking.about.thinkingElla's characters is absolutely awesome, and I loved the "You wish." at the end. Loved this chapter, update soon!
~thinking.about.thinking
4/4/2010 c12 16Melissa Brooks
I loved how Chloe stuck up for Dylan and how Dylan is already referring to her as his sister. I can't wait to read more about Matthias's past with Adrienne and Dylan. It seems like there is more backstory that is causing tension with these three characters and I am intrigued to find out what.
16Melissa BrooksI loved how Chloe stuck up for Dylan and how Dylan is already referring to her as his sister. I can't wait to read more about Matthias's past with Adrienne and Dylan. It seems like there is more backstory that is causing tension with these three characters and I am intrigued to find out what.
4/4/2010 c12 Typically Cliche
Is just me or does Chloe seem to less awkward and growing a backbone as the story goes on! I love it update soon please.
Is just me or does Chloe seem to less awkward and growing a backbone as the story goes on! I love it update soon please.