for 9119/26/2007 c1 
10DarkBlysse
The rhyme scheme is spot on, as is the rhytm and meter.
And I must say the last line is very touching-moreso than the rest of the poem combined!
Great work! ^_^*
-Blysse
10DarkBlysseThe rhyme scheme is spot on, as is the rhytm and meter.
And I must say the last line is very touching-moreso than the rest of the poem combined!
Great work! ^_^*
-Blysse
12/18/2006 c1 21Ekoaleko
Wow...this is really great...I wasn't there at the 911 scene, but I know it was...horrible...amazing poem...
21EkoalekoWow...this is really great...I wasn't there at the 911 scene, but I know it was...horrible...amazing poem...
12/8/2006 c1 82Isabella22
Beautiful. This is a day no one will ever forget. I still get teared up when I see pictures and such.
82Isabella22Beautiful. This is a day no one will ever forget. I still get teared up when I see pictures and such.
9/12/2006 c1 2stone.eyes.stone.heart
Very sad.. and touching.. it makes me remember the day I heard about it. I was in fifth grade and my teacher walked in and said 'The World Trade Center in NYC has been bombed.' We thought she was kidding. She wasn't.
It didn't strike me as hard as it struck others, me being Canadaian, though I do live fairly close.. only about 20 hours away.. But I still felt the pain of it.And this poem captures that pain really well.
Good job and keep writing.
2stone.eyes.stone.heartVery sad.. and touching.. it makes me remember the day I heard about it. I was in fifth grade and my teacher walked in and said 'The World Trade Center in NYC has been bombed.' We thought she was kidding. She wasn't.
It didn't strike me as hard as it struck others, me being Canadaian, though I do live fairly close.. only about 20 hours away.. But I still felt the pain of it.And this poem captures that pain really well.
Good job and keep writing.
7/23/2006 c1 1Theophania
that poem is really good. i almost cried reading it... in a good way. 9/11 was a really sad day.
1Theophaniathat poem is really good. i almost cried reading it... in a good way. 9/11 was a really sad day.
7/20/2006 c1 4DayDreamEvolution
that was ...great^^...and sad as well...that was an awful day wasn't it I seem to be drwan by almost anthing that has to do w/ 911 for 1 special reason...thats my bith day...to all those who lost their life my they rest in peace^^-~nya~
4DayDreamEvolutionthat was ...great^^...and sad as well...that was an awful day wasn't it I seem to be drwan by almost anthing that has to do w/ 911 for 1 special reason...thats my bith day...to all those who lost their life my they rest in peace^^-~nya~