for Forsaken4/24/2009 c1 
4B. J. Winters
Interesting image: And it warms me/Into amnesia. It's unique and yet you feel the comfort of numbness. Good repeated with comforting stupor - makes me think of alcohol, without the blatent reference.
Nice job.
4B. J. WintersInteresting image: And it warms me/Into amnesia. It's unique and yet you feel the comfort of numbness. Good repeated with comforting stupor - makes me think of alcohol, without the blatent reference.
Nice job.
8/10/2007 c1 6concerto49
Hm yes, inspiration can come at virtually any time any place.
Your descriptions are rather unexpected. I couldn't imagine that those words could combine like that.
It was little ironic yet weird. I don't know what to say about it, but it was cool.
Anyhow. Cheers.
6concerto49Hm yes, inspiration can come at virtually any time any place.
Your descriptions are rather unexpected. I couldn't imagine that those words could combine like that.
It was little ironic yet weird. I don't know what to say about it, but it was cool.
Anyhow. Cheers.
10/1/2006 c1 25cornered.sensations
This very sweet and pretty, 'I feel your embrace in the rays of the sun,' very nice work with a tinge of sadness at the end.
By, the way, thankyou for all your kind reviews!
25cornered.sensationsThis very sweet and pretty, 'I feel your embrace in the rays of the sun,' very nice work with a tinge of sadness at the end.
By, the way, thankyou for all your kind reviews!
9/16/2006 c1 59Frore
Beautiful wording! None of the syllables are distruptive in any way, yet despite it's nice imagery, it's very easy to understand. Good job!
59FroreBeautiful wording! None of the syllables are distruptive in any way, yet despite it's nice imagery, it's very easy to understand. Good job!
7/11/2006 c1 anne
It's beautiful.
It's beautiful.