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4/24/2009 c1 4B. J. Winters
Interesting image: And it warms me/Into amnesia. It's unique and yet you feel the comfort of numbness. Good repeated with comforting stupor - makes me think of alcohol, without the blatent reference.

Nice job.
8/10/2007 c1 6concerto49
Hm yes, inspiration can come at virtually any time any place.

Your descriptions are rather unexpected. I couldn't imagine that those words could combine like that.

It was little ironic yet weird. I don't know what to say about it, but it was cool.

Anyhow. Cheers.
10/1/2006 c1 25cornered.sensations
This very sweet and pretty, 'I feel your embrace in the rays of the sun,' very nice work with a tinge of sadness at the end.

By, the way, thankyou for all your kind reviews!
9/16/2006 c1 59Frore
Beautiful wording! None of the syllables are distruptive in any way, yet despite it's nice imagery, it's very easy to understand. Good job!
7/11/2006 c1 Adrienne Cantilina
Love it. Very simple, yet spells out the point clearly.
7/11/2006 c1 4tamarkaph2006
I get an empty feeling reading this.
7/11/2006 c1 anne
It's beautiful.

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