
7/21/2006 c1
14mindOFdeliriousUNREST
this is amazing writing! it flows well, the theme is great. just keep it up!

this is amazing writing! it flows well, the theme is great. just keep it up!
7/15/2006 c1
35JAGreenDay
Aw Men Men Men... BLAH! lol ... if he breaks it, i shall break his precious, lol!
J.A.

Aw Men Men Men... BLAH! lol ... if he breaks it, i shall break his precious, lol!
J.A.
7/13/2006 c1 a lonely september
this was good, i liked it. it had a nice beat to it. it had hope, love, mistakes but more hope... it was pretty. and nicely done. the way the poem is written i dont think its ending too well, but its quite good. you did a nice job... : )
this was good, i liked it. it had a nice beat to it. it had hope, love, mistakes but more hope... it was pretty. and nicely done. the way the poem is written i dont think its ending too well, but its quite good. you did a nice job... : )