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7/21/2006 c1 I.O.K.O
A little common, but all and all seemed kind of romantic.
7/21/2006 c1 14mindOFdeliriousUNREST
this is amazing writing! it flows well, the theme is great. just keep it up!
7/21/2006 c1 22L. Lazuli
pretty cool. the ending's good. your lines are very beautiful =)

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7/15/2006 c1 35JAGreenDay
Aw Men Men Men... BLAH! lol ... if he breaks it, i shall break his precious, lol!

J.A.
7/14/2006 c1 unspecified
I really like this... it's contest good. thanks for reviewing!

love, me
7/13/2006 c1 a lonely september
this was good, i liked it. it had a nice beat to it. it had hope, love, mistakes but more hope... it was pretty. and nicely done. the way the poem is written i dont think its ending too well, but its quite good. you did a nice job... : )
7/13/2006 c1 113Travis C. Eckert
Excellent, by far.

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