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8/20/2006 c1 133Dying Rose
First word that comes to mind: WOW. Your boyfriend is extremely talented and it sounds like you're really lucky to have him! Congratulations to the both of you. :) "While the angels cry,

And sing the serpents song.

But while they sing the song I bury the truth into your arms,

And try to tame our burning hearts within the darkness."

These lines are absolutely mind blowing. I am further blown away by "Now our hearts are free from the dark chains that held them,

And the angels drown in the tears they cried,

The bloodly tears."

The images created by this poem are incredibly powerful. Your boyfriend speaks his thoughts in an amazingly simple-but-complex way; It speaks truthfully of the pain of love but also of the endurance and steadfast light. Beautiful, beautiful poetry. He should keep writing.

Best wishes!

Thanks for the review!

7/14/2006 c1 so-lovely
This poem is absolutely beautiful! You're lucky to have a boyfriend like Dustin!

7/14/2006 c1 17shynesss
Wow...Your boyfriend definitly has a lot of talent. This poem is one of the best love poems I've read.

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