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7/16/2006 c1 2review-a-holic
lol...i loved IT...YOU definitely have a lot of talent!...in fact i'd say you were the best writer i've come across today...so KEEP writin...soRRy... din't have the time to read your other stuff...but i will..and that's a promise...although..here's a bit of advice...if you haven't already done this...try writing something more serious...as in something with more meaning...im sure you'll ace it!... in fact you have the potential to be a columnist!

me :-P

hey...http:/w.fictionpress.com/~reviewaholicthats my link...you can read all about me...if you wanna...tc...
7/14/2006 c1 9dreamforever101
oh! I finally got the ending after I read the other review! I luv the ending! nice way to decide the winner :D
7/14/2006 c1 With Rhyme and Reason
Oh, VERY refreshing. Just right for a horribly hot, humid, Midwestern summer day. Like a glass of ice water and a shot of something strong to follow.

I'm rather impressed by this. You take a plot which is ludicrous (to be polite) and managae to insert a sense of suspense while maintaining the humor. I found myself actually taking sides. Your characters (or, rather, caricatures of characters) are nicely crafted to fit with their names-their features seem to be the deciding factors of their personalities. So much for looks not mattering.

And "rock, paper, scissors" should be used to decide more conflicts. The world would be a better place if people would say, "Hey, before we go to war, let's do rock-paper-scissors. Best of three."

Nice job on this. I'm pretty positive that I'm missing the greater meaning, but I don't care.

J

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