6/5/2008 c2 3Kadekksys
haha... love the ending. That's a very unfortunate situation to be in. :P Seriously though, I wish your chapters were longer. :/
haha... love the ending. That's a very unfortunate situation to be in. :P Seriously though, I wish your chapters were longer. :/
6/5/2008 c1 Kadekksys
I liked the beginning, but she's so observant for 6 :P Then again, that's an age where kids can really go either way. But I like it so far. :)
I liked the beginning, but she's so observant for 6 :P Then again, that's an age where kids can really go either way. But I like it so far. :)
7/27/2006 c2 42Catherine Julia Jefferson
I really like it. It's well written and chalked full of suspense. Keep it going!
PS: JHU offers cool distance classes. ;)
I really like it. It's well written and chalked full of suspense. Keep it going!
PS: JHU offers cool distance classes. ;)
7/19/2006 c2 71Bob Evans
The plot thickens. This is really good. The story is moving a little fast, but I still like it.
The plot thickens. This is really good. The story is moving a little fast, but I still like it.
7/18/2006 c2 awestruck4
I like the modern twist to the Snow white story. I thought, though, that Serena's mother's death would have a greater impact on Serena i.e. does Serena ever get depressed? Did she confide in her friends? Also, it seems too easy to believe that Serena overheard Dora talking about her plans with Kevin. Didn't Dora know better than to talk about such things when she knew Serena was at home? Other than that, the story so far is pretty good & intense! Please update ASAP!
I like the modern twist to the Snow white story. I thought, though, that Serena's mother's death would have a greater impact on Serena i.e. does Serena ever get depressed? Did she confide in her friends? Also, it seems too easy to believe that Serena overheard Dora talking about her plans with Kevin. Didn't Dora know better than to talk about such things when she knew Serena was at home? Other than that, the story so far is pretty good & intense! Please update ASAP!