for The Girl on the Skateboard5/1/2012 c9 
3OutOfTheNight
I really like this story... The point of view with the unknown person was pretty cool. I bet I can guess who it is! (Mimi?) I think that you should keep that up with the major pranks,but don't give away their plan!
Write more on this and Flunk! Just found out it's from 2006, and your like 21 or something now, but your really good at funny stories. Have you published anything yet?
3OutOfTheNightI really like this story... The point of view with the unknown person was pretty cool. I bet I can guess who it is! (Mimi?) I think that you should keep that up with the major pranks,but don't give away their plan!
Write more on this and Flunk! Just found out it's from 2006, and your like 21 or something now, but your really good at funny stories. Have you published anything yet?
6/16/2007 c9 8kittymobile
Hey. I've just finished reading this story and i have to admit, you have me hooked. You're brilliant at description and i get a clear picture of just what is going on.
I know you love flattery =) so i'll keep the constructive criticism to a minimum: there are a few too many commas than needed in places and a tiny amount of typos. Seriously though, other than that, ten out of ten. Both for plot and the way you get it across. Amazing. If you'd like me to i can try and point out typos and stuff for you, just to make your book one hundred percent phenomenal, (at the moment it's like 99.9%) heehee. I hope you like my review and if you have the time could you please take a look at my vampire story? Don't feel pressured into it though. Again, your story is excellent.
8kittymobileHey. I've just finished reading this story and i have to admit, you have me hooked. You're brilliant at description and i get a clear picture of just what is going on.
I know you love flattery =) so i'll keep the constructive criticism to a minimum: there are a few too many commas than needed in places and a tiny amount of typos. Seriously though, other than that, ten out of ten. Both for plot and the way you get it across. Amazing. If you'd like me to i can try and point out typos and stuff for you, just to make your book one hundred percent phenomenal, (at the moment it's like 99.9%) heehee. I hope you like my review and if you have the time could you please take a look at my vampire story? Don't feel pressured into it though. Again, your story is excellent.
5/30/2007 c8 CrystallineEyes
Anyway, belated bday and uhmm...advance happy bday kc May na now.
Eheheh...
So, will Yamato have feelings for Aiya?
Well, will he?
UGH!
Boy, am I excited.
Anyway, belated bday and uhmm...advance happy bday kc May na now.
Eheheh...
So, will Yamato have feelings for Aiya?
Well, will he?
UGH!
Boy, am I excited.
5/30/2007 c1 CrystallineEyes
Cool!
Yeah, i like most of your works. They're cool.
^^
Please update soon.
Cool!
Yeah, i like most of your works. They're cool.
^^
Please update soon.
1/5/2007 c9 84DemonicDestiny
OMG! OMG! OMG! I can't wait to find out what's gonna happen next... I kinda think that Mimi (That's her name right?) might be the person behind everything. I don't know why... Heehee, whatever! lol. Update soon.
84DemonicDestinyOMG! OMG! OMG! I can't wait to find out what's gonna happen next... I kinda think that Mimi (That's her name right?) might be the person behind everything. I don't know why... Heehee, whatever! lol. Update soon.
10/8/2006 c9 7Niki Tori
Dun Dun Dun! Who is the unknown person...Aiya is going to kick their butt with a wooden staff! Also what is the history between Josiah and Yamato? I guess I'll have to wait for the 10th chappie huh?
DARN IT ALL! I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!
Anyways this chapter rocked! I loved it SO much!
Until Chappie 10
LoVe You!
Niki!
7Niki ToriDun Dun Dun! Who is the unknown person...Aiya is going to kick their butt with a wooden staff! Also what is the history between Josiah and Yamato? I guess I'll have to wait for the 10th chappie huh?
DARN IT ALL! I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!
Anyways this chapter rocked! I loved it SO much!
Until Chappie 10
LoVe You!
Niki!
10/8/2006 c9 5Kizuna
I wonder what happened a month ago! Please let us know soon!^_^ And I wonder who the unknown person is! Please update soon, this is so exciting!^_~
5KizunaI wonder what happened a month ago! Please let us know soon!^_^ And I wonder who the unknown person is! Please update soon, this is so exciting!^_~
10/8/2006 c9 angelic mind
tol! astig ung story mo. :)
tol! astig ung story mo. :)