for Adolovescence8/3/2006 c1 
197the Stranger in the moonlight
This was an example of amazing and exquisite poetry. Beautiful, truly.
I loved the idea of Aphrodite tiptoeing away, after making two people see the world in each other.
~the Stranger in the moonlight~
197the Stranger in the moonlightThis was an example of amazing and exquisite poetry. Beautiful, truly.
I loved the idea of Aphrodite tiptoeing away, after making two people see the world in each other.
~the Stranger in the moonlight~
7/26/2006 c1 17dancingintheshadows
You are my new favorite person. For always. And if you for some reason feel the inane urge to impregnate someone, I will be happy to have your babies. And yes, I am one of those people who shouts "HAVE MY BABIES!" at awesome people. Or feels the need to lick them. But don't worry about the licking thing... I don't really do that anymore... much.
Phew... Way of topic, but then again I am in quite the strange mood having just been immersed in old stories I'm clearing out.
I absolutely have fallen completely head over heels in love with this poem. The imagery, the feelings it invokes; just everything about is breathtaking.
The last line really tied it all together for me and made the poem all the more awesome.
-sighs- I can't even express the words...
I shall exuent with my imaginary friend Bob... who happens to love pickles by the way, and takes to scaring off "normal" people when I talk about him... before I ramble you to death. Cause that would be bad. ^^
~dancingintheshadows
17dancingintheshadowsYou are my new favorite person. For always. And if you for some reason feel the inane urge to impregnate someone, I will be happy to have your babies. And yes, I am one of those people who shouts "HAVE MY BABIES!" at awesome people. Or feels the need to lick them. But don't worry about the licking thing... I don't really do that anymore... much.
Phew... Way of topic, but then again I am in quite the strange mood having just been immersed in old stories I'm clearing out.
I absolutely have fallen completely head over heels in love with this poem. The imagery, the feelings it invokes; just everything about is breathtaking.
The last line really tied it all together for me and made the poem all the more awesome.
-sighs- I can't even express the words...
I shall exuent with my imaginary friend Bob... who happens to love pickles by the way, and takes to scaring off "normal" people when I talk about him... before I ramble you to death. Cause that would be bad. ^^
~dancingintheshadows
7/17/2006 c1 3Adaku
Wow, I never expected a review from you. YOu seem to be an excellent writer to even read my stories. I've also notice your other ones as well, and thought they were perfect. Along with this poem. Keep up the great work. Thanks for reviewing my stories. Till next time
waterhealer
3AdakuWow, I never expected a review from you. YOu seem to be an excellent writer to even read my stories. I've also notice your other ones as well, and thought they were perfect. Along with this poem. Keep up the great work. Thanks for reviewing my stories. Till next time
waterhealer
7/16/2006 c1 11LEDlorien7
I think it's really pretty. I love your poetry. I love your writing style, especially with poems. I love the first stanza, and i think i understand it. It's like, Beauty is like better, and if everything is better, there is no such thing as better anymore. sort of. right? Anyway, i really like it!
11LEDlorien7I think it's really pretty. I love your poetry. I love your writing style, especially with poems. I love the first stanza, and i think i understand it. It's like, Beauty is like better, and if everything is better, there is no such thing as better anymore. sort of. right? Anyway, i really like it!
7/16/2006 c1 35Autumn Reflections
XD i love it! it is so cute and i love the last line! genius! *hugs*keep writing!
Autumn^^
35Autumn ReflectionsXD i love it! it is so cute and i love the last line! genius! *hugs*keep writing!
Autumn^^
7/16/2006 c1 20Autumn Dance
It's lovely...*smiles* I think it sounds like a song, and it fit's well with the song that ui'm listening to at the moment- One Day by Trading yesterday. I adore your Love poems- they're amazing...I LOVE the line=“I love you,” I whispered.“You will,” you reply. “In time.Once you get over the wonder of this.”It's incredible and sent shivers. Well done sugar bee *hugs*Keep writing and so beautifullyAutumn x x x x x x x
20Autumn DanceIt's lovely...*smiles* I think it sounds like a song, and it fit's well with the song that ui'm listening to at the moment- One Day by Trading yesterday. I adore your Love poems- they're amazing...I LOVE the line=“I love you,” I whispered.“You will,” you reply. “In time.Once you get over the wonder of this.”It's incredible and sent shivers. Well done sugar bee *hugs*Keep writing and so beautifullyAutumn x x x x x x x
7/16/2006 c1 33PearlinTheMist
I loved this. It has a silent almost ethereal feel to it. Strange mysterious poetry boy? Can I borrow him? haha.Very well written, I loved this work. Write more.
33PearlinTheMistI loved this. It has a silent almost ethereal feel to it. Strange mysterious poetry boy? Can I borrow him? haha.Very well written, I loved this work. Write more.
7/16/2006 c1 raelia
this is beautifully written. love the title, it was expressed well. and thanks for the review!
this is beautifully written. love the title, it was expressed well. and thanks for the review!
7/15/2006 c1 12elisefey
The title is exceedingly clever, loved that. A lot of your wording is very smooth and almost melodic. You obviously sense the rhythm and sound of the words as you put them into phrases which I find lacking in most writers but is so useful in writing, especially in poetry. To me the line about Aphrodite matched the theme of the poem but not the style (I think she felt too tangible to me: less like a metaphor and more like a third party intruding upon this couple's moment) but your ending line about being "older than you think" was absolutely perfect. All in all a very nice, very elegant poem. I liked it.
12elisefeyThe title is exceedingly clever, loved that. A lot of your wording is very smooth and almost melodic. You obviously sense the rhythm and sound of the words as you put them into phrases which I find lacking in most writers but is so useful in writing, especially in poetry. To me the line about Aphrodite matched the theme of the poem but not the style (I think she felt too tangible to me: less like a metaphor and more like a third party intruding upon this couple's moment) but your ending line about being "older than you think" was absolutely perfect. All in all a very nice, very elegant poem. I liked it.
7/15/2006 c1 Skeeter the Groundhog
wow. that was really beautiful. i'm putting it under my favorites. so, that makes two of your writings my favorites, therefor you get the marvy priviledge of being under my favorite authors. let's boogy!
wow. that was really beautiful. i'm putting it under my favorites. so, that makes two of your writings my favorites, therefor you get the marvy priviledge of being under my favorite authors. let's boogy!
7/15/2006 c1 An-Author-At-Heart
This is cute, I love the reference to Aphrodite, very classy. And the Adol(ove)escence was a smart title, i didn't understand it at first cuz the link didn't have the brackets. But it was nice, adolescent love expressed well in here
This is cute, I love the reference to Aphrodite, very classy. And the Adol(ove)escence was a smart title, i didn't understand it at first cuz the link didn't have the brackets. But it was nice, adolescent love expressed well in here