for Lobotomy7/15/2006 c1 
24she's not breathing
pretty. original, too. i love the concept. & i really like your style, but i think, after reading quite a bit of it, that it's a little too haphazard. your imagery is amazing, but it rarely links together. & that's fine when that's what you intend, but when it's every time, everywhere - i just think it could be so much more. lovely work, though.
~kait
24she's not breathingpretty. original, too. i love the concept. & i really like your style, but i think, after reading quite a bit of it, that it's a little too haphazard. your imagery is amazing, but it rarely links together. & that's fine when that's what you intend, but when it's every time, everywhere - i just think it could be so much more. lovely work, though.
~kait
7/15/2006 c1 51drippingdreams
Intriguing. I really like the lines "Love, that tasted nice./Life, left a sour taste." and "Sympathy equals lobotomy." The end is really good too. Nice descriptions.
51drippingdreamsIntriguing. I really like the lines "Love, that tasted nice./Life, left a sour taste." and "Sympathy equals lobotomy." The end is really good too. Nice descriptions.