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7/20/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
This really captures the feeling well. Like a snapshot of what love should be, and often is. I like how you sum up such heavy topics in so few words. Well done.
7/17/2006 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Very nice. I like your ideal and conclusion; it makes more sense than just saying - we'll always be in love. Keep up the good work, and update soon.

Juliet.
7/16/2006 c1 169MallowsWins
Love this. I love how you see love as a moment that lasts forever insdead of a feeling that lingers. Very original.

Daze
7/16/2006 c1 61the.pink.life
Nice. Short, simple, sort of a declaration of how love and life is. Keep writing! :)
7/16/2006 c1 31kalmia raphael
heh. short and to the point, but i like it. the message that true love only lasts a moment is sorta ironic but appears happy. i like the italics, bold, etc =)

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