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1/30/2017 c6 DeltaBOB
Gall, it's been something like eight years since you've touched this. Such a pity.

On its third go around all I ever got was a different take on the set-up. It's a blessing you kept the Red Hibiscus going because I can compare it with the original two drafts. All three offer a unique perspective on the characters and setting you created. I think they also touch briefly on your outlook towards the franchise each time. Draft 1 was feeling out the water, Draft 2 had a specific theme in mind, and Draft 3 was trying to ground it for the newcomers.

The direction it was going feels the same each time. That didn't change too much. But I'm sad it never got past the first act. What was Alex's conflict arc? Where was this tale going? One of these days I'll have to message you and demand a resolution. You gave us so much of what came before.

I'd like to think you had an idea of where it was going.

~Bob Evans

P.S. Do you even lurk on the Internet anymore?
12/21/2008 c2 Bob Evans
I've noticed you've made Skye a little more...cynical? I'm not sure that's the right word, but she seemed so much more caring and worrisome about other people in previous versions, and now you've made her more careless. An intentional change, perhaps?
10/7/2008 c1 8R.E.D. the animator
Wo-ho! You finally updated after like, FOREVER!

This is yet another new angle on the story and I'm interested to see how it ties in to the main plot.
9/23/2008 c1 Bob Evans
When did THIS come up?

I know why an alert was never sent out, but still, how long has this been sitting here unknown to us? And why do you keep changing the beginning? The second version was my favorite.

And further more, you have not made any updates since. It'll take a miracle to get you to finish this.
8/4/2008 c1 8Raven O'Connor

I know this place is for reviews but thanks for notifying me regarding the stolen stories. I've reported the abuse at lulu and they've taken those stories down, among a few others that belonged to other FP authors. Thank you.

3/13/2008 c1 2Double AA
You need to find those files! But I bet next time out will be the best version EVER!
10/23/2007 c1 Diane Smith
I'll help if you want, although I don't know how much of a help I'll be...
10/5/2007 c9 18TT-da-lamanite
Its all gone! lol, okay than you work, make good, and I will try to stop talking like a caveman...
9/10/2007 c9 70Bob Evans
Tsk, tsk. You should really plan these out before you start releasing it to the general population. Now we've got wait in even more total suspense.

Well...you did show me all that stuff at ET, so I guess I should be content...
9/10/2007 c9 Jadeisms
Boo...Here i was all excited, and then all i get is that...BOO!

*throws the popcorn at the sick stay at home child*
8/24/2007 c8 8R.E.D. the animator
I finaly got the time to read your story! It's pretty good. But the end of the last chapter confused me.
8/11/2007 c8 Double A
So is she or is she not Annie? I'm still a little confused, but I guesse the only thing to do is read more. Will there be more soon, I know I just started reading again, but the story keeps you wondering and I'm one of those people who likes to read to the end quikly rather than figure it out myself.

Also I thought that those of you who read Fanfition too, might want to know that I(thats right me) am co-writing(RED the Animator is the other author) a story called Voldemort goes to Hogwarts. Its about Voldemort who goes to Hogwarts to kill Harry, but everything goes wrong. It is a comedy and I think it is funny, but thats just my oppinion.

well gotta go read more storys, bye!

Double A
7/18/2007 c2 R.E.D. the animator
You write long chapters!

I decided to start over from the begining to refresh my memory.

My dad made a new rule that my siblings and I have to exersize to get computer time. So I won't be able to read the whole story at once.

P.S. That's the same reason why Amy hasn't been reading ether.
7/16/2007 c8 70Bob Evans
You've now successfully passed where you left off last time, having stopped the story to go back and rework the plot. Chapter 8 is new turf, and also, quite frankly, new insight into the freakiness of Damien and Skye.

I always thought Skye was above petty jealousy, but apparently not. And I'm assuming either Damien lied to her to keep Alex safe, or that Damien didn't see something when he was searching her mind.

Either way, now they're on the run in the human world, yes? Well that'll be interesting. Hopefully we'll get a grand tour of what the planet is like now that it's been devistated by war for years.

~Bob Evans
7/15/2007 c7 Bob Evans
You know what; there are still many questions. But then again, most would take too long to actually put in a review, and overall it deals with the mystery behind the story and the creator of said story. Hopefully they'll even be understood and explained as the story evolves. So perhaps in the end, maybe these questions are irrelevent.

But there is one that I can ask. Why did you choose to write this particular part of the epic. Obviously "Demon's Wake" is but a chapter in this whole legacy. So why did you write and post this part of it?

But focusing back on the update; I can't tell whether Damien or Alex is your favorite character. Maybe both. I would've assumed Alex right away, but you put emphasis on Damien. Then again, he could just be a very well developed character. You've really done well with characterization in this story; that's a given.

The only complain, is of course, grammer. Words and letters often make a disappearing act in the middle of your sentences. Other than that, I really hope you complete this. The end is still a mystery.

~Bob Evans
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