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for My last chat with a good buddy

12/26/2006 c1 Black Obsidian
Aww, I'm really sorry to hear that. My parents did that to me a while back, but now I'm off to school so they can't do anything!

But I hope everything works out okay; online friends are only dangerous if you let them, usually from carelessness.

Chin up! I'm sure you'll talk to him again, someday.
8/30/2006 c1 7firesword
wow

sad

HA your parents gave you boundaries, kinda like mine, they never gave me time to talk to friends of fiction press, not that any of them talk to me but

i must say touching
7/19/2006 c1 Tim Stillman
Really sad. One of the dangers of the net, and yet seems like a nice friendships on the rocks because of other people who hurt others; the going away, final words, pulling the name forever more; the hurt is so skillfully woven into the story. The dialogue if fiction is excellent; and if its real dialogue, it still is excellent, because it has to be made real on screen or paper; thru dialogue alone and the attendant comp marks and signs, it has to be human, to convey one human talking with another; it could have come off like robots, but it definitely did not; these are two real flesh and blood friends saying goodbye forever, and whatever the age, whatever the means used to say goodbye, it hurts, and that is conveyed with compassion and loyalty.
7/17/2006 c1 12Kay Yingling
hey, thanks for the review...

this piece would be easier to read if you seperated out each of the IMs back and forth. that way the reader doesnt have to try and keep up between all of the other information.

keep writing!
7/16/2006 c1 5Mezmiro
It's sad your friendship had to end this way. Parents really should reconsider this entire child predator rumor and actually research it fully.

If you really think your child is going to be a victim to a predator, then you really have no faith in them.. it's sad really.
7/15/2006 c1 Darket
I really hoped I could have talked longer, but I guess it was fast. Yeah man, it's been good talking to you. Too bad it all had to turn out this way. But everything will be really sweet later man. Things will brighten up. They always do.

Peace, Love, Triangle!

Darket

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