for If I Were Brave Enough7/18/2006 c1 TotallyPMS
This was a great way to introduce the main character. I usually wait for more to say this but: "I'M HOOK TO YOUR STORY", can't wait for more.
This was a great way to introduce the main character. I usually wait for more to say this but: "I'M HOOK TO YOUR STORY", can't wait for more.
7/17/2006 c1 randall
this story makes me happy.
i was going to say that it had the coolest beginning ever, but then realized that it had the coolest middle ever and the coolest ending ever. this is everything a short story should be. i used way too many vague contractions in that last run-on sentence.
this story makes me happy.
i was going to say that it had the coolest beginning ever, but then realized that it had the coolest middle ever and the coolest ending ever. this is everything a short story should be. i used way too many vague contractions in that last run-on sentence.
7/16/2006 c1 
14Carrollesque
Hah, loved this story before, love it even more now. And your updating again! Woohoo!
Keep it up.
14CarrollesqueHah, loved this story before, love it even more now. And your updating again! Woohoo!
Keep it up.
7/16/2006 c1 EnigmaticArsenic
he he, i found this story completely amusing. who knew cheetos could be so motivational. ah- the power of cheese.
he he, i found this story completely amusing. who knew cheetos could be so motivational. ah- the power of cheese.
7/16/2006 c1 9InspiredSpider
you no what that was a great start im really looking forward to hearing more
update soonspider
9InspiredSpideryou no what that was a great start im really looking forward to hearing more
update soonspider