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12/26/2011 c1 My poor toaster
Question mark? One thing makes no sence. Why did his DAD have sex with his MOM if the dad is gay?
7/19/2006 c1 Gabagaba
Interesting. I do want to see more, although... This is more of a prologue or a teaser on the front page. I hope the chapters get longer... A few things in there bug me, however. "Whatever you say, Dad." Justin answered. This would be correct if you replaced the period with a comma. If you have a tag line, you never use a period; you always replace it with a comma. However, if you have another form of punctuation, an exclaimation point, for example, you don't replace it with a comma.
7/18/2006 c1 1GeorgyannWayson
YAY! I'm not really the fan of gay stories, but this time this looks good! Great start so far!

7/18/2006 c1 25Esquirella
Off to a promising start!

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