for A Forbidden Love12/26/2011 c1 My poor toaster
Question mark? One thing makes no sence. Why did his DAD have sex with his MOM if the dad is gay?
Question mark? One thing makes no sence. Why did his DAD have sex with his MOM if the dad is gay?
7/19/2006 c1 Gabagaba
Interesting. I do want to see more, although... This is more of a prologue or a teaser on the front page. I hope the chapters get longer... A few things in there bug me, however. "Whatever you say, Dad." Justin answered. This would be correct if you replaced the period with a comma. If you have a tag line, you never use a period; you always replace it with a comma. However, if you have another form of punctuation, an exclaimation point, for example, you don't replace it with a comma.
Interesting. I do want to see more, although... This is more of a prologue or a teaser on the front page. I hope the chapters get longer... A few things in there bug me, however. "Whatever you say, Dad." Justin answered. This would be correct if you replaced the period with a comma. If you have a tag line, you never use a period; you always replace it with a comma. However, if you have another form of punctuation, an exclaimation point, for example, you don't replace it with a comma.
7/18/2006 c1 
1GeorgyannWayson
YAY! I'm not really the fan of gay stories, but this time this looks good! Great start so far!
BFQ
1GeorgyannWaysonYAY! I'm not really the fan of gay stories, but this time this looks good! Great start so far!
BFQ