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3/27/2007 c1 124in theory
"His saliva is drying"..wow I love that. Really cool.
7/31/2006 c1 829Anaare
A very beautiful and interesting poem to read. An excellent choice of words and wonderful imagery. Well done!
7/27/2006 c1 2miss understanding
I saw your profile and your pen name and . . . wow. ^_^ Muy bien? ::goes off rambling in Spanish::

i like the opening lines. They're so . . . harsh. I like all the 't' and 'ck' sounds that give it a rough, abrasive quality. Poetry is neat like that.

I would be lying if I said I understood all of it, but I get the feeling you're not supposed to. ::sigh::

The best part is the end. "I think we're both going to die." Now why did he say that? Death is eventual of course, but did she poison him, maybe?

P.S. I like pinecones, too. ^_^ I especially like throwing them at people. =P

xchoco
7/18/2006 c1 48Amber Seguin
O, it's col. I'm tired right now so I don't really get it but I'm sure it'll al become clear after a few hours of - *snore* No but seriously, it's really nice, I like dimples in the sand part especially =D Oh and that would mean you're scared of me. Right? *evil laugh*

Love and hugs and toodles and noodles from Amber

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