
1/15/2014 c13
3Miho Tribe
I really liked this story and I hope to hear more from it. :) I secretly hope that Xerxes finds that Kaila is the one he's looking for and that she has some super strong magic powers that she busts out and kicks everyone's but. :P

I really liked this story and I hope to hear more from it. :) I secretly hope that Xerxes finds that Kaila is the one he's looking for and that she has some super strong magic powers that she busts out and kicks everyone's but. :P
11/1/2013 c13
9Tatiana Knight
Hello there!
Just wanted to say Im in completely L-O-V-E with this story. So much so I (unintentionally) was late for work because its just so amazing.
You have an amazing writing style and your attention to details is enough to make other writers (like myself) green with envy.
I feel an obligatory need to point out I have the biggest girl crush on Vader. Like no joke, I squeal with giggles at half the stuff he says.
I really hope you update soon (yes! I am one of THOSE readers) because Id love to see where all this takes Kaila.
Have a good day and happy writing!
- T.K.

Hello there!
Just wanted to say Im in completely L-O-V-E with this story. So much so I (unintentionally) was late for work because its just so amazing.
You have an amazing writing style and your attention to details is enough to make other writers (like myself) green with envy.
I feel an obligatory need to point out I have the biggest girl crush on Vader. Like no joke, I squeal with giggles at half the stuff he says.
I really hope you update soon (yes! I am one of THOSE readers) because Id love to see where all this takes Kaila.
Have a good day and happy writing!
- T.K.
4/17/2013 c12 Guest
Wicked awesome story! Read it straight trough. Cannot wait for the update!
Wicked awesome story! Read it straight trough. Cannot wait for the update!
9/9/2009 c10 Blackrain7557
Rather unexpected, though it's been a while since I read the last chapter, but nonetheless very interesting. Your stories tend to be extrodinarily well thought out and written so it's what keeps us mere mortals coming back for more.
Looking forward to updates for this and the rest of your stories.
Rather unexpected, though it's been a while since I read the last chapter, but nonetheless very interesting. Your stories tend to be extrodinarily well thought out and written so it's what keeps us mere mortals coming back for more.
Looking forward to updates for this and the rest of your stories.
8/4/2009 c1 SevenKnights thus SevenScars
you gotta update...great story and all that...kuddos...XD
you gotta update...great story and all that...kuddos...XD
5/9/2009 c9 Summer Leah
Oh my god i LOVE this story! It is just so incredibly well-written! I'm always amazed at the quality of writing I find on these sites.
So, I see you haven't updated in a few months! I hope that means you're not leaving the story? In other words, PLEASE CONTINUE!
Oh my god i LOVE this story! It is just so incredibly well-written! I'm always amazed at the quality of writing I find on these sites.
So, I see you haven't updated in a few months! I hope that means you're not leaving the story? In other words, PLEASE CONTINUE!
5/3/2009 c9
2akaCHEEKS
no! i don't want her to become a vampire bride! no! man! i was hoping she would be an angel. die then become an angel you know? i don't know. i mean, how can she be both good and bad? if she gets turned then it ruins everything man.

no! i don't want her to become a vampire bride! no! man! i was hoping she would be an angel. die then become an angel you know? i don't know. i mean, how can she be both good and bad? if she gets turned then it ruins everything man.
3/26/2009 c9
16Kiyoko Usagi
this story just makes me sadder and sadder.
and im still convinced that Xerxes needs a man.

this story just makes me sadder and sadder.
and im still convinced that Xerxes needs a man.
3/26/2009 c8 Kiyoko Usagi
I think Xerxes needs a man in his life
hahaha
obviously women just arent working out : )
I think Xerxes needs a man in his life
hahaha
obviously women just arent working out : )
3/26/2009 c7 Kiyoko Usagi
I havent seen this story in...i think years.
and for this chapter all i have to say is...dear God!
Certain areas on my body are cringing in pain.
I havent seen this story in...i think years.
and for this chapter all i have to say is...dear God!
Certain areas on my body are cringing in pain.
2/21/2009 c9
16MadameLeQueen
I absolutely love the story :] the beginning was okay but the more indepth it got I was entranced by it xD
Update :D

I absolutely love the story :] the beginning was okay but the more indepth it got I was entranced by it xD
Update :D
2/19/2009 c9
2bignsassy818
Xerxes' character is a very complex one. HE obviously has a dark past and there's more to it than the fallen angel story. It's also obvious that he has loved and lost in his past life. An immortal as you have hinted in previous chapters. I would love to see more of his background. Kaila is also a very strong character. She's not the conventional heroine. Described as not pretty but worth looking at. She is also strong and brave yet so pure as Xerxes said. She still radiates innocence despite what's happned to her. I also adore the secondary characters such as Vader, Sivayesh and Myra.. I'm so glad you didn't give up on this story and ended it's hiatus.. I hope you update soon because I want to see how their story unfolds and past stories become revealed.

Xerxes' character is a very complex one. HE obviously has a dark past and there's more to it than the fallen angel story. It's also obvious that he has loved and lost in his past life. An immortal as you have hinted in previous chapters. I would love to see more of his background. Kaila is also a very strong character. She's not the conventional heroine. Described as not pretty but worth looking at. She is also strong and brave yet so pure as Xerxes said. She still radiates innocence despite what's happned to her. I also adore the secondary characters such as Vader, Sivayesh and Myra.. I'm so glad you didn't give up on this story and ended it's hiatus.. I hope you update soon because I want to see how their story unfolds and past stories become revealed.