
5/27/2011 c1
16non.graceful
Because it was written in the way that you wrote it in, I liked it.
It was shirt and cute.
The only bit that was just a bit off was when you were thinking abiut calling him and he called. I think it would have been better if you had um made the whole 'wanting to call him' a bit longer- prolonging it if you wish.
I'd like to know, did anything end up happening after this- besides you giving him a new pair of socks ?

Because it was written in the way that you wrote it in, I liked it.
It was shirt and cute.
The only bit that was just a bit off was when you were thinking abiut calling him and he called. I think it would have been better if you had um made the whole 'wanting to call him' a bit longer- prolonging it if you wish.
I'd like to know, did anything end up happening after this- besides you giving him a new pair of socks ?
4/22/2010 c1
1i heart . questionmark
nice one!hehehe(seriously my laugh sounds like hehehe..sometimes)

nice one!hehehe(seriously my laugh sounds like hehehe..sometimes)
7/12/2008 c1 MK16
LOL
very cuute!
omigosh that happened?
how did it end up for you?
and well done ^.^
LOL
very cuute!
omigosh that happened?
how did it end up for you?
and well done ^.^
4/4/2008 c1 Hanban
Aw! I super like the fact that this really happened to you. :D So sweet. -does the happy dance-
Aw! I super like the fact that this really happened to you. :D So sweet. -does the happy dance-
3/24/2008 c1 Roman C Lee
What happened afterwards? Oh, I am so nosey but it's like a story to me; a story that NEEDS to be updated!
What happened afterwards? Oh, I am so nosey but it's like a story to me; a story that NEEDS to be updated!
3/24/2008 c1
20Twilight Starr
Nice story. It was enjoyable. :D Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day.
~Twilight Starr~

Nice story. It was enjoyable. :D Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day.
~Twilight Starr~
8/25/2006 c1 special
Gah! I Love Love LOVED this.
Beautifully written.
Verryy realistic. But I guess that's 'cause it's a true story. Lol.
But the little things that I'm sure everyone would do (and that everyone would leave out of their story) made this piece so awesome.
"I looked at my reflection in the microwave mouthing ‘who the heck’ to myself."
Gah! That's something I would totally do.
Wonderful job!
So cool that that happened to you. =]
;)allie
Gah! I Love Love LOVED this.
Beautifully written.
Verryy realistic. But I guess that's 'cause it's a true story. Lol.
But the little things that I'm sure everyone would do (and that everyone would leave out of their story) made this piece so awesome.
"I looked at my reflection in the microwave mouthing ‘who the heck’ to myself."
Gah! That's something I would totally do.
Wonderful job!
So cool that that happened to you. =]
;)allie
8/3/2006 c1
4Lady Katreina
I am SO jealous! I hope that happens to me - in the future of course n...n! Great recreation! I love it, especially that it's real!

I am SO jealous! I hope that happens to me - in the future of course n...n! Great recreation! I love it, especially that it's real!