for i wanna be your marilyn monroe7/24/2006 c1 Elizabeth Bilberry
This poem really appealed to be, especially the third verse. You give out some interesting thoughts and imagery in this lovely poem of yours.
EB
This poem really appealed to be, especially the third verse. You give out some interesting thoughts and imagery in this lovely poem of yours.
EB
7/23/2006 c1 
90WiltingBlackRose
Well, that was just completely...BREATH-TAKING!
But seriously, it was great.
90WiltingBlackRoseWell, that was just completely...BREATH-TAKING!
But seriously, it was great.
7/19/2006 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
Seriously? Best song (I'm assuming that's what you were going for?) I've read in a long time. I got to "i wanna be your miss golden dreams/& you can be my benxodiazepine" and was floored, because the only other person I've seen use that word in a song is Tori Amos (from "pancake" - the line is "Like a flag/On a popstar/On a Benzodiazapene"). So, yes, freak out time for me if you can conjure up images of Tori Amos. Obviously I'm favoriting this. Too gorgeous not to. Keep writing! :)
871no.peace.los.angelesSeriously? Best song (I'm assuming that's what you were going for?) I've read in a long time. I got to "i wanna be your miss golden dreams/& you can be my benxodiazepine" and was floored, because the only other person I've seen use that word in a song is Tori Amos (from "pancake" - the line is "Like a flag/On a popstar/On a Benzodiazapene"). So, yes, freak out time for me if you can conjure up images of Tori Amos. Obviously I'm favoriting this. Too gorgeous not to. Keep writing! :)
7/18/2006 c1 68this is britt
you have no idea how happy the history in here made me. that's so terribly nerdy, isn't it?
i wanna be your miss golden dreams& you can be my benzodiazepine - that was my favorite part in the whole thing.
glad to see you are back- and with a vengence, this truly is great, so I'm going to favorite it.
68this is brittyou have no idea how happy the history in here made me. that's so terribly nerdy, isn't it?
i wanna be your miss golden dreams& you can be my benzodiazepine - that was my favorite part in the whole thing.
glad to see you are back- and with a vengence, this truly is great, so I'm going to favorite it.
7/18/2006 c1 83Prevaricate
fantastic. Just all around brilliant and it makes me want to go jump off a bridge just for that moment of wind in my hair with Mr. RightWrong holding my hand.
you are a wonderful writer. this is going on my favorite's list.
83Prevaricatefantastic. Just all around brilliant and it makes me want to go jump off a bridge just for that moment of wind in my hair with Mr. RightWrong holding my hand.
you are a wonderful writer. this is going on my favorite's list.
7/18/2006 c1 26SimplyxAndyxDi
Again.
Love it!
I swear, you always make me want to write a pretty poem. I simply adore your writing. Keep it up!
26SimplyxAndyxDiAgain.
Love it!
I swear, you always make me want to write a pretty poem. I simply adore your writing. Keep it up!