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7/27/2006 c1 31Blood-Rose-36502
Hey Becca, How are you doing? Well this little write up is a tease isn't it? It's been a long time since we've talked.Alot has happened! I got married and I'm expecting in February. I don't have time to write stuff to submit anymore,really! I'm so busy lately. Well, hope to hear from you soon! Love, Megan
7/20/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
I like the emphasis on the "M" in the end line. Really enhances the sound and escalates the situation. Good haiku.
7/19/2006 c1 12Tia LaPorte
Very sexy and well executed. :)
7/19/2006 c1 96Pandakun84
hm... not bad.
7/19/2006 c1 169MallowsWins
Well, no confusion to what this is about. I like it, its direct and reminds me of moment in movies where you see a woman picking out her most sexy outfit to meet a guy. I think this could have used a little more imagery, but I still like it.

Daze
7/19/2006 c1 6Nobody-n-Particular
Hm, very direct in intention.

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