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8/10/2006 c3 13shutupcharlotte
this is amazing.

i can feel the tension.

gorgeous, please, yes, let's see where this takes us!
7/28/2006 c3 48chocohound
Another great chapter! It's good that they're short too, gives me a chance to read them, plus, it adds more anticipation.

I really love these characters. They're so original. I've never read characters so unique and intreguing in any story on here yet. If I was a male, I would want to impress Audrey too!

Great job! Keep up!
7/26/2006 c3 22silverheart121
good start. work on longer chapters. its ok if it means larger spaces of time between updates. its worth the wait.
7/26/2006 c3 1cam1sado
Again I'm amazed at the details put into this. And don't worry about being a slow writer, just don't give up on the story. You've got talent =P
7/25/2006 c2 48chocohound
Wow, it really is short. I hope you have more soon. I don't even like reading stories on here, but I love yours, so that's really saying something. Definetly keep going with it. I love the characters, and I'm really intregued to see what happens to them.
7/22/2006 c2 1cam1sado
Short but sweet. And very romantic. A walk in the rain? Sexy.
7/22/2006 c2 1Erin Maureen
liking this story alot, i just wish they were longer chapters...hint hint
7/22/2006 c2 22silverheart121
keep this going, it's got great potential. its sweet and pleasantly put together.
7/19/2006 c1 20wee-rebz
oh see where it takes you. thats really cute :) i like it
7/19/2006 c1 48chocohound
Wow. I'd love to see where you take this. I like it a lot. The descriptions were great. I love how you've described Daniel and Audrey. I think I can almost tell what kind of people they'll be already. I'm really interested in reading more!
7/19/2006 c1 1Fall-of-me
very good i like ita nice little shopsarbucks is such a nice place so warm and snug m!keep it up!

7/19/2006 c1 3Lucca Ashtear
KEEP GOING! I really, REALLY want to see where you take this.
7/19/2006 c1 1cam1sado
I think you should run with it. I love the line, "What if you met someone...?" Nicely written.

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