for I'll Title This When It's Finished8/10/2006 c3 
13shutupcharlotte
this is amazing.
i can feel the tension.
gorgeous, please, yes, let's see where this takes us!
13shutupcharlottethis is amazing.
i can feel the tension.
gorgeous, please, yes, let's see where this takes us!
7/28/2006 c3 48chocohound
Another great chapter! It's good that they're short too, gives me a chance to read them, plus, it adds more anticipation.
I really love these characters. They're so original. I've never read characters so unique and intreguing in any story on here yet. If I was a male, I would want to impress Audrey too!
Great job! Keep up!
48chocohoundAnother great chapter! It's good that they're short too, gives me a chance to read them, plus, it adds more anticipation.
I really love these characters. They're so original. I've never read characters so unique and intreguing in any story on here yet. If I was a male, I would want to impress Audrey too!
Great job! Keep up!
7/26/2006 c3 22silverheart121
good start. work on longer chapters. its ok if it means larger spaces of time between updates. its worth the wait.
22silverheart121good start. work on longer chapters. its ok if it means larger spaces of time between updates. its worth the wait.
7/26/2006 c3 1cam1sado
Again I'm amazed at the details put into this. And don't worry about being a slow writer, just don't give up on the story. You've got talent =P
1cam1sadoAgain I'm amazed at the details put into this. And don't worry about being a slow writer, just don't give up on the story. You've got talent =P
7/25/2006 c2 48chocohound
Wow, it really is short. I hope you have more soon. I don't even like reading stories on here, but I love yours, so that's really saying something. Definetly keep going with it. I love the characters, and I'm really intregued to see what happens to them.
48chocohoundWow, it really is short. I hope you have more soon. I don't even like reading stories on here, but I love yours, so that's really saying something. Definetly keep going with it. I love the characters, and I'm really intregued to see what happens to them.
7/22/2006 c2 22silverheart121
keep this going, it's got great potential. its sweet and pleasantly put together.
22silverheart121keep this going, it's got great potential. its sweet and pleasantly put together.
7/19/2006 c1 48chocohound
Wow. I'd love to see where you take this. I like it a lot. The descriptions were great. I love how you've described Daniel and Audrey. I think I can almost tell what kind of people they'll be already. I'm really interested in reading more!
48chocohoundWow. I'd love to see where you take this. I like it a lot. The descriptions were great. I love how you've described Daniel and Audrey. I think I can almost tell what kind of people they'll be already. I'm really interested in reading more!
7/19/2006 c1 1Fall-of-me
very good i like ita nice little shopsarbucks is such a nice place so warm and snug m!keep it up!
Fall_of_me
1Fall-of-mevery good i like ita nice little shopsarbucks is such a nice place so warm and snug m!keep it up!
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