for bones1/20/2007 c1 
270queenvixta
Good piece. A lot of people will be able to relate to this. I like it a lot, I just feel the ending is a little too abrupt.
Good work though,
[Vikki]
270queenvixtaGood piece. A lot of people will be able to relate to this. I like it a lot, I just feel the ending is a little too abrupt.
Good work though,
[Vikki]
8/7/2006 c1 31Freddie of Albion
I've been away from writing as you probably noticed. It's great to come back and see you're still on top form...well done!
31Freddie of AlbionI've been away from writing as you probably noticed. It's great to come back and see you're still on top form...well done!
7/19/2006 c1 9i am pookie
haha!
i really liked this one as well. how common is it for girls (people) to only notice the imperfections (i am so GUILTY of that!) and just focus on them? you made that clear.
but i love the ending line: 'so i could watch'. it leaves me thinking 'watch WHAT?'-but i just add on to the piece-watch your life grow up around you? watch how everything falls in place because you know yourself, what you want and it isn't just bones anymore, but you.
because you know your body-the mind of it.
haha, i just really enjoyed it.
9i am pookiehaha!
i really liked this one as well. how common is it for girls (people) to only notice the imperfections (i am so GUILTY of that!) and just focus on them? you made that clear.
but i love the ending line: 'so i could watch'. it leaves me thinking 'watch WHAT?'-but i just add on to the piece-watch your life grow up around you? watch how everything falls in place because you know yourself, what you want and it isn't just bones anymore, but you.
because you know your body-the mind of it.
haha, i just really enjoyed it.